Reviews For Darkness Within
Reviewer: BrianMcLyr Signed Date: 2016.11.30 - 10:13PM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor kutgw, to paraphrase Ski Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2016.09.30 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor I really like your story so far. You're doing great at making your characters interesting. Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.08.11 - 03:31AM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor Longbottom Manor is a completely different world as where Ginny and Harry grew up. Everything breathes money. This is usually not a good environment for children to grow up. Anna's father does not seem very interested in Anna. Everything you can buy for money is OK, but nothing to personal. Hopefully their beginning friendship will help both, Anna and Neville, in their development. Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.08.10 - 07:50PM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor The writing in this chapter conveys that there is humanity in all characters -- a philosophy that echoes in many of your reviews. I know in the previous chapter that you wrote Riddle as the lost cause that he is canonically -- a barren soul lacking any compassion or remorse. That's fine of course, but I will be most interested to see how you treat the various conflicted, nuanced, grey characters that Rowling herself began to elaborate upon later in the series. Compassion and fairness to such souls is a good test of a writer's depth. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.08.09 - 02:46PM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor Anna performing some type of blood magic is rather concerning. I'm glad that Neville has a friend at home now. I imagine he needs one. Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.08.06 - 02:29AM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor Thank you for giving us such a detailed account of Anna's first days in England. I'm beginning to like her a lot and I'm glad she and Neville seem to have become friends. I think being together will be good for the two of them, mainly because having someone his own age around will be good for Neville's confidence, especially since their tutor is Remus Lupin. Well done. Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.08.02 - 09:01PM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor The secret to successful fanfic propagation is to introduce compelling new characters that tell you interesting things about the characters you knew. This story is doing a wonderful job of that. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.08.01 - 04:23PM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor Finding this a very welcome break from the norm! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2016.08.01 - 12:47AM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor Oh, oh...why do I have a bad feeling about this? I dearly hope that Katherine didn't raise her granddaughter to take revenge on her behalf ...Neville really deserves to have a friend at home... Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.07.31 - 09:11AM Title: Chapter 2 Longbottom Manor Really interesting story. | |||||||
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