Reviews For Darkness Within
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.10.23 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow I've gone a few chapters without feeling that I had anything particularly useful to say. I've been carried along by curiosity; shedding misconceptions as I went along. Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.09.26 - 10:22AM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow Charlie's dream was quite a surprise. Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.09.20 - 09:11AM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.09.18 - 02:50PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow Wow! That was unexpected. Charlie having a wet dream! I guess the dragons haven't affected his libido! Really enjoying how you work Anna and Neville into canon events! Can't wait for the Cup! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.09.17 - 04:21PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow Well I wasn't expecting that! Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.09.17 - 01:17PM Title: Chapter 13 The Burrow That certainly took an unexpected turn. I am interested to see what significance this dream could have with regards to, perhaps, Anna's 'Darkness Within'. I think I felt a bit of the same sting as Charlie after enjoying the dream prose, and then retroactively inserting the two characters after his conversation with Bill. I've been enjoying your story, I will make a better effort to review more on it. | |||||||
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