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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.10.07 - 08:37AM Title: Chapter 15 The Woods

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Fabulous chapter. I think Anna is going to have to start giving some answers soon.
Keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.10.05 - 01:36AM Title: Chapter 15 The Woods

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Frankly, I thought William was a being a Richard...(hehe)

A young girl using blood magic certainly would draw some red flags, but I am assuming the back story of all that will not appear until Anna(well You, really) feels it is necessary. Good show

Author's Response: Your comment had me laughing out loud! Thank you very much!!!



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2016.10.04 - 09:05PM Title: Chapter 15 The Woods

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Looks like things are going to get difficult for Anna. It should be interesting to watch it all unfold. Keep up your great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.10.03 - 02:14PM Title: Chapter 15 The Woods

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This chapter was quite an eye opener! And the mystery surrounding Anna deepens! Not to mention her grandmother! Can't blame Bill for his curiosity! Can't wait for the next installment! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes indeed, Anna and her grandmother shared some mysterious knowledge and magic. I don't truly blame Bill for his curiosity either. With his job as a curse breaker and his feelings of responsibility as a big brother, his persistence is understanding. Glad you are enjoying the story!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.10.01 - 01:43PM Title: Chapter 15 The Woods

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I thought Bill's attitude was entirely out of order. He could ask but to demand answers was ill mannered. Still an interesting chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I quite agree that Bill crossed the line and became a bit ill mannered in his quest for information. Glad it was interesting!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.09.30 - 11:34PM Title: Chapter 15 The Woods

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Bill's Hermione-ish side certainly made for interesting reading. As the oldest of seven and holding the job he does certainly explains why he demanded to know about Anna's spells. I'm glad Anna was willing to explain what she cast and why she chose those specific spells; I'm also glad that Bill seemed satisfied with her explanation, even though she wouldn't answer his demand for why her grandmother taught them to her in an unrecognizable language.

Again, I thoroughly enjoyed reading some very familiar scenes from another's perspective. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It seemed logical to me that Bill in particular (eldest brother, Gringotts curse breaker, and former Head Boy) would push for information after finding them in the woods the way he and Charlie did. It also seemed like an appropriate time for Anna to share some information about herself with friends and family. Glad you enjoyed it!




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