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Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.11.03 - 07:46PM Title: Chapter 21 Speculations and Fears

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Nice job on this chapter! I know the movie didn't but I can't remember if the book mentioned anything about Hermoine actually kissing Krum! She obviously wouldn't have done more due to her true feelings for Ron! Apparently they haven't figured out at this point that Skeeter herself is the bug! Can't wait for the 3rd task and how Anna figures in! :D:D:D:D;D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I have always found it a bit of mystery how close Hermione and Viktor became at the Yule Ball and at other times during this school year. A kiss seemed like a safe assumption! The third task is coming up soon!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.11.03 - 12:54PM Title: Chapter 21 Speculations and Fears

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Leave it to Pansy Parkinson to spread ugly rumors because she's insanely jealous of Hermione being the thing Viktor would miss most! Yes, Rita started it, but that doesn't mean Pansy has the right to defame Hermione's character with her insinuations. On the other hand, it's very nice that Anna and Ginny stuck up for Hermione and set Lavender and Parvati straight on what really happened. Not that's real friendship!

Thank you for showing the téte-a-téte between Dumbledore and McGonagall. I know you're setting something up and look forward to learning the result of their meeting.

Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Pansy is such a nasty character that I can easily see her spreading horrible rumors about Hermione. JKR insinuated quite a bit without ever really spelling out what was being said about Hermione and Viktor, or what was contained in all of the "hate mail" Hermione received. Ginny and Anna are loyal friends, and I would like to think that Lavender and Parvati would not want to believe such things of their fellow Gryffindor.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.11.03 - 10:22AM Title: Chapter 21 Speculations and Fears

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Really good and enjoyable chapter
Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.11.03 - 09:07AM Title: Chapter 21 Speculations and Fears

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I don't begrudge Ron his time in the limelight. Her needs it from time to time to feed his ego.

Ah yes, Rita Skeeter, the gossip queen of the wizarding world, one of the most unpleasant characters in our beloved universe. I was desperately disappointed when JKR made Ginny a colleague of Rita Skeeter. It was like putting her on the same level as this evil woman. I'll never forgive her.
To be honest, I didn't expect that Ginny is still as clueless as she was in this scene. She isn't a tween anymore.

Some things will never change, the tension is rising and the Hogwarts professors are as clueless as ever. :-)
Many thanks for another wonderful chapter.

(Parvati Patel --> Patil)


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ron does need his moments of attention occasionally. Being the youngest of a group of brothers like his could not possibly be easy. I completely agree about Rita Skeeter. She is simply horrid in so many ways! I suppose Ginny being a bit clueless may have been wishful thinking. I would like to think that many thirteen year old girls would be unaware of such things (the mom and aunt in me is hoping such things are still a bit of a mystery). Thank you for pointing out the spelling of Parvati's last name. I'm not sure how I missed that!




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