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Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.02.13 - 07:32PM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
I can't help but feel bad for Molly in this one. Only one daughter to spend a lifetime dreaming about her wedding to be foiled at every turn. I know it's Ginny's wedding, but my heart aches for Molly :(
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2017.04.17 - 04:06AM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
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Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.03.04 - 06:55PM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
Wonderful job with the first letter -- an exquisitely sensible, yet sensitive, communication from across the decades. I also was moved by Harry's short retrospective immediately after reading the letter -- a fine touch which shows an excellent reading of canon.
No complaints at all about the rest of the chapter either -- the healing progresses in earnest, in a measure of the very 'British' cultural sensibility you're drawing on. In this, I refer to a land that had seen, over its centuries, much tragedy, and an equal amount of resilient recovery. To say that 'life goes on' is not to require that it be drear and brooding...
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2017.02.15 - 09:54PM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
First, I just wanted to let you know that my mail was putting this site's notifications in my spam box. I'd been off wondering where you've been since chapter 10, finally deciding to send you a message to see if all was well. I came to the site and saw more chapters. Sheesh! I don't know why that happened, but now I have something to keep me busy tomorrow (or tonight if I can't hold out).
Now to this chapter... Poor Pansy! At least she's seen the way of things. I have to wonder if self-preservation will keep her from playing her part in Lucius's scheme or if that plus her hatred of Harry and Ginny will lead her to try to take over.
I can imagine how hard it was for Harry to read all those letters. Will they soften his heart at all toward his aunt? I don't think so, but it does make me wonder. And when will Ginny and Harry let her folks in on the extent of his inheritance? I wonder if they will feel awkward or if they expected as much, given what they would have known about James Potter and his family.
I'm glad Hermione and Ron made it home and her parents are well, but I hope they get some privacy soon too. I did love Molly and Arthur's efforts to not catch them and to do a little sparkin' of their own. I love those two!
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know about the communication issues! I never received your message and would not have failed to reply had it arrived! I hate to admit this, but reviews really keep me going. I love nice ones and critical ones help make me a better writer. So, thank you so much! I was madly posting and the reviews dried up! I figured everyone was hating the story, but not wanting to flame my work too badly! After all, this is a friendly site! I think most of your questions/observations have found responses in the story by now. If not, drop me a message! Thank you, again!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.02.12 - 02:14AM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
So much intensity and intimacy in this chapter! I love the way you are showing the loving relationships between multiple couples. Looking forward to the wedding!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the very kind review! I'm so glad you like the approach. I thought it would be ineresting to explore the differing aspects of marital relations between couples with differing levels of commitment.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2017.02.11 - 07:03AM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
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Author's Response: Thank you for the nice rating!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.11 - 12:59AM Title: Chapter 11 - Exploration and Discovery
Ah harry and ginny are in for more fun and trouble.....as for ron and hermione welll it happens that the cat needs to be let out of the bag...as for molly and auther well they need a relase as well...poor pansy but she did make her own bed and slept in it to the end...now she needs to think fast and so does draco for that matter.....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks for posting such an insightful review! You have nailed these issues squarely on the head!
