Reviews For A Proper Epilogue
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.02.15 - 12:02PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) Ooh, I love the intrigue! Love the idea of the Death Eater wives seizing control and attempting to run things. I find them far more imposing than their husbands! Cissy can hold her own with Kingsley, but I'd really love to see Draco survive a night in Ministry lock up. Now that would be an amusing read! Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2017.11.21 - 10:56AM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?)
First of all, I hope you're not offended I'm taking forever to make my way through the story! It's a fascinating tale; just that my free time often now gets taken up with site issues and whatnot. Anyway, the 'story after the story' construct in your Epilogue seems more intriguingly tangled than the first part -- lots of cloak and dagger! Pansy herself, however, is so very not-cloak-and-dagger. An interesting tragic heroine. Anyway hope all's well. With luck, I should be popping back into your review space again soon! Author's Response: Greetings! I am in no way offended. To the contrary, I am pleased and honored that you are spending this much time on my story. Thank you. Now, I think I need to review this chapter in order to understand your comments! Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.02.24 - 12:29AM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) Oh, my! I'm having difficulty imagining what could possibly be going on now. On the other hand, I have never considered the Death eaters wives as much as I should have. This is truly fascinating! Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 05:17PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) THAT PESKY SUBMIT BUTTON STRIKES AGAIN! ;) Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 05:11PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) An unexpected event, indeed! Good catch by Harry that the wives may be behind the attack! (BTW, I saw a t-shirt on google with "DEUS EX MACHINA" on it) After all, as the old saying goes, "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned"! And it wouldn't be any surprise that Deathmunchers' wives would be involved! Can't blame Pansy for ending up on the floor......obviously realized her mom could have done it! Could work out financially for her tho, especially if they get her dad too! Thanks for updating so quick! Looking forward to the next one with bated breath! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 05:11PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) An unexpected event, indeed! Good catch by Harry that the wives may be behind the attack! (BTW, I saw a t-shirt on google with "DEUS EX MACHINA" on it) After all, as the old saying goes, "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned"! And it wouldn't be any surprise that Deathmunchers' wives would be involved! Can't blame Pansy for ending up on the floor......obviously realized her mom could have done it! Could work out financially for her tho, especially if they get her dad too! Thanks for updating so quick! Looking forward to the next one with bated breath! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 04:52PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) What I am left wondering is have you left wiggle room for a misdirection on a whodunnit angle? We have a handful of dark Stepford wives that seem to be the perpetrators? Was the meeting a heating pad party, or something more devious? Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 03:03PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) This story is getting better and better each time. At some point, you will have to mention Andromeda Tonks and Teddy. Then you will have to touch on Narcissa and Andromeda.... Draco and Teddy... as these characters are kin. Also, with the Death Eaters at large, will the DA be mobilised once more? How about the Muggle born withes and wizards who were badly treated under the Commission led by that toad faced woman. who likes pink and giggles a lot...... potential army in the making.... what do you think? Your story has so much potential that it can go on for a very long time... After all, 19 years is a long time. Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 01:32PM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) Oh Draco... Once a prat, always a prat. It's like he's an overgrown toddler sometimes. Narcissa really is a badass! I wonder what brought her and Lucius together in the beginning. Did he know this side of her, but then expected her to take a backseat to his ambitions? Or did she always fall into a more demure roll until he died? Interesting. Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 08:11AM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) Oh boy Oh Merlin..... What? Excellent. I am so depressed because the weather in London is so appalling and your updates cheers me up big time. Thank you. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.23 - 02:48AM Title: Chapter 19 - Puzzle Pieces (or Deus ex Machina?) Well there is a right time and a wrong time to conduct an interview. Pansy just got her head wound around, and now knows that her mother is no better off than her father. As for Cissy and Draco they just played the right him with the help not being in the loop of anything going on. Kutgw | |||||||
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