Reviews For Fairy Tale
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.01.18 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 4 I am really enjoying this story. It’s a great premise, and you have a wicked way of making things more complicated for your couple. I suspect there is more to the story of Harry leaving than we (and Ginny) realize. Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.01.14 - 02:05PM Title: Chapter 4 Hope Ginny gives Harry a chance. After all, he could have walked off keeping his disguise a secret, but he's made the effort to find out about pregnancies and is really trying to contact her. Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.01.12 - 11:57PM Title: Chapter 4 So, now Ginny knows who her fling was with! It doesn't seen like things are going to be smooth sailing at this point, though. I'll be looking forward to reading more about how they deal with the child and their own relationship. Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.01.12 - 02:09AM Title: Chapter 4 Your plot is quite interesting and I'm eager to know about Harry and Ginny's relationship, but you should really get someone to beta the story for you.There are too many grammar mistakes. You seem to be uncertain about what verbal tense to use, than you use more than one and it doesn't make a lot of sense. Anyway this latest chapter is much better than the first ones, but some mistakes remain. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 4 I'm glad Harry was persistent in tracking her down and at least try to start talking to her. I didn't expect her to be so angry. He's just found out she's pregnant, wants to talk and she yells at him because he doesn't have a plan? I hope he continues to be persistent. Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 12:51PM Title: Chapter 4 Oh my, the proverbial really is about to hit the fan in a big way now! I literally can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and I couldn't help but burst out laughing at "Ronalda" :) Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 08:24AM Title: Chapter 4 Wonderful to see another chapter! I'm somewhat disappointed by Ginny's reaction to Harry. While I understand her being surprised and scared (not to mention hormonal), Harry is the father of her child. She needs to swallow her pride, grow up a bit, and give him the opportunity to do the right thing. Having said that, Harry needs to step up quickly and try to be a bit more articulate :) Looking forward to reading more! Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 08:17AM Title: Chapter 4 So, now Ginny knows who her fling was with! It doesn't seen like things are going to be smooth sailing at this point, though. I'll be looking forward to reading more about how they deal with the child and their own relationship. Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2018.01.09 - 06:51AM Title: Chapter 4 I'm with Ginny, even if she was a bit impatient. She's better off alone as with a guy who's "in the field" all year chasing skirts and hunting dark wizards all over the world. | |||||||
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