Reviews For Tengu and Ninja's Daughter
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.10.29 - 09:15PM Title: Chapter 2 There really aren't any sympathetic characters in this story. Draco and Scorpius are bullies. Al is whiny - 'If Malfoy wouldn't evaluate students fairly, he was prepared to consult his father.' What? He has a headmistress as well as a head of house to go to before going to his father. 'My father will never allow him to have a prejudice against me.' I don't know exactly what he is trying to say. I'm guessing Al is saying his father won't allow Draco to be biased against him? That is an offense worth going to Azkaban? He didn't go for being a Death Eater, I don't think he'll be sent to Azkaban for being a horrid, petty, biased teacher - after all, Snape wasn't. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.10.15 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 2 Nice to see the kids are playing so well!!!!!!sometimes rose is smarter then her mother and is using some of the brains from her father as well isn’t he planing of the future....kutgw | |||||||
|