Reviews For Tengu and Ninja's Daughter
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.11.12 - 06:48PM Title: Chapter 7 Crack If Harry thought these eggs were important to his investigation, wouldn't he have the proper authorization to examine the eggs? They had to wait until the next day to look at the eggs? I'm sure they could have just sent a message to Kingsley and received permission. I realize it was to give MacNeil the time to do whatever he did, but it didn't really flow. Harry doesn't seem like this is an urgent investigation - going to parties, visiting people unofficially. I didn't get the whole 'come back from the Veil'. Is that a euphemism for dying? Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.11.10 - 08:11AM Title: Chapter 7 Crack Ah Draco has a soul after all....kutgw | |||||||
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