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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.12.12 - 08:39AM Title: Chapter 34

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Great ending to a, at least in my experience, rather unique story. I loved it, even if I wasn't too familiar with most of the characters at the beginning.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.12.12 - 08:27AM Title: Chapter 33

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Oh, that was the most unusual way I saw Tommy Boy's demise. I liked it!
"neither can like while the other survives" -> can live (??)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.12.12 - 07:54AM Title: Chapter 31

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Hmm, Anwen's plan sounds much more dangerous and much riskier. I'm pretty curious about which plan they'll choose. I can't help it, but something is telling me it's going to be the riskier...



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.12.12 - 07:25AM Title: Chapter 30

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Oh, so Tom is hiding? Does he suspect what is waiting for him? It seems the old Blacks were close allies of Tom as he's hiding in one of their estates instead of residing with the Malfoys. We will see...



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.12.12 - 06:41AM Title: Chapter 29

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The plan how to remove Harry's Horcrux sounds a bit uncomfortable. I hope everything works out and Harry isn't in limbo for too long, preferably not at all.
I had to smile about the missing "s" in "right behind my car," ;)



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.12.08 - 02:49PM Title: Chapter 34

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What a splendid ending to a story I hate to see end! Sad that Andrew and Julia are gone but the rest of the family are flourishing and that's a blessing after everything that happened! Happy to see Harry and Ginny become parents! Thanks for such a wonderful tale, MNF! Happy Holidays, and, as Tiny Tim said, God bless us, everyone!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really enjoyed revisiting my characters in a slightly different way. The family is doing well, all happily living the lives they always should have. Andrew and Julia were quite old when James was born, so having another 4 years and getting to see more of their grandchildren be born, as well as Harry married is quite a bonus. I hope you have the happiest of holidays as well. MNF



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2019.12.08 - 02:10PM Title: Chapter 34

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Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you. MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.12.08 - 01:58PM Title: Chapter 34

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Very nice ending and sad to see it it so...kutgw in all you do, happy holidays

Author's Response: I was sad to end it, but the story had run its course. Thanks for enjoying it so much and for your prolific reviewing. MNF



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2019.11.18 - 10:50PM Title: Chapter 33

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,An interesting way of getting rid of Tom.

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you liked it. MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.18 - 05:09PM Title: Chapter 33

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Well I don’t think anyone is really sorry to see old Tom go, and i also think harry had a moment of realization that with out the curse he couldn’t hear nagini....kutgw

Author's Response: No one will be sad. Now Harry gets to live his life like everyone else, no weird pressure on him. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.11.18 - 10:17AM Title: Chapter 33

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WOWSERS! Didn't see this one coming! Quite a different and muted end for Nagini, Wormtail and Voldeschmuck then what we are used to in canon! But I loved it! Nagini found out the hard way why you don't tick off the red headed fire breather! Glad the marauders were in on the demise - poetic justice! Waiting for the next one with baited breath! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: This was a demise fitting for a man in hiding. His evil finally ate him from the inside out.. Never mess with Ginny. The final chapter is up now. I hope you like it. MNF



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.11.15 - 10:01AM Title: Chapter 32

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Holy cliffhanger, Batman! Ding Dong the big one's gone! Hope everyone is okay! Bad day for Voldeschmuck! Sounds like Sirius is about to have a great day -- and night! Can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I'm working on the next one, and it should be out by midweek. I'm a fan of the cliffhanger. Tom really isn't enjoying this story at all. Poor guy (not). As for Sirius, Anwen needs to be at least awake, which she isn't right now. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF

Author's Response: I'm working on the next one, and it should be out by midweek. I'm a fan of the cliffhanger. Tom really isn't enjoying this story at all. Poor guy (not). As for Sirius, Anwen needs to be at least awake, which she isn't right now. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.15 - 06:22AM Title: Chapter 32

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Well that’s good but at what cost did it happen...I think little Henry is not going to be happy now...kutgw

Author's Response: Henry will be okay, the danger is over and his daddy can go to him while mummy deals with his brother. The cost could be high, but it was undertaken willingly. Thanks for reading and reviewing, MNF



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.11.04 - 09:20AM Title: Chapter 31

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Quite the quandary for Harry and Arwen! Either a bad choice or a worse choice!
Both very dangerous for the two of them. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D


Author's Response: I don't think anyone has the delusion that the fight with Tom will be easy or without great risk. Anwen just wants to see that Harry is safe, and she does have a plan. Bad choices all around, but hope that they can get this done and overwith. MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.03 - 09:04PM Title: Chapter 31

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Harry has every right but then again so does Anwen...kutgw

Author's Response: Harry has a wonderful sense of duty about him, but so does Anwen. The difference is that Anwen has some freaky powerful magic she never asked for but wants to use to help. MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.03 - 09:55AM Title: Chapter 30

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Oh leave it to someplace they have knowledge of...bad move Tom...kutgw

Author's Response: Tom seriously thinks no one is as smart or talented as he is, boy is he wrong. MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.03 - 09:36AM Title: Chapter 29

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Well everyone in there teens is...kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.03 - 09:20AM Title: Chapter 28

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Well now that the gang is back they are down again...kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.03 - 09:03AM Title: Chapter 27

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Oh crap, the cabinet works....kutgw

Author's Response: Yup, it does. Where did Remus go? MNF



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.11.03 - 08:44AM Title: Chapter 26

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Oh crap...Hogwarts won’t be the same....kutgw




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