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Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.06.25 - 03:06PM Title: Chapter 5
If I was Harry and Theia I'd never go back to that place with it's creepy people again! I can't stop thinking that 'something wicked this way comes' when they're at the Loney. I hope nothing really bad happens to them or Ginny.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2018.06.24 - 02:15PM Title: Chapter 5
It really is hard for me to believe you hadn't posted a chapter in four months. Simply because I was able to pick up reading without forgetting what had happened previously.
Your style has this way of presenting a growing dread and uneasiness within certain specific situations, that allow the feeling to pervade the overall plot arc. MelindaLeo mentioned the common 'ducky' usage, I think that is a microcosm of what I am trying to explain.
Reading some Stephen King is one of the comparisons that come to mind in how your writing can affect.
I kind of chuckled at Theia criticizing the life choices of that poor woman. Maybe Theia doesn't realize her own relationship with her own mother (RIP, which makes it even more compelling now, cheers) wasn't exactly...healthy.
Anyway, I think your writing is fantastic. Cheers!
Author's Response: What a wonderful review, you have made me so happy. Thank you so much and I am so glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.24 - 01:27PM Title: Chapter 5
I meant begining too! :0
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.24 - 01:26PM Title: Chapter 5
Great to see a new chapter from you! Interesting visit between Marcy and Ginny! Marcy doesn't see all there, which is understandable when you come from Loney which is begging to look more like the Twilight Zone! Hope the next one isn't far off! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.06.23 - 11:03AM Title: Chapter 5
Its nice to see you back! I enjoyed Ginny's visit with Marcy, but I couldn't help the nagging feeling that she was talking about someone else but it seemed like Harry. I might be off base, but I read it twice and something is still unsettling. Both she and Ella referred to Harry and Ginny as "duck." I really enjoyed Harry's introspection on life in the Loney. He was very much like Marcy only vastly different, too. He grew up the only one with magic and being shunned for it - opposite, yet alike, though so far, I like this other "family" better than the Dursleys. Of course, that isn't hard to do! Favorite part was Harry remembering Nagini possessing Bathilda. Your writing evoked that same creepiness. Well done!
Author's Response: I love it when readers pick up on the little things! Thanks forbyour review :)
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.22 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the last sentence. Very profound.
