Reviews For Hollow Ash
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.10.05 - 11:43AM Title: Chapter 10 Yikes! Not a nice find in the tree! Something ominous is amiss! Harry seems to have a good strategy to investigate! Cute bit with Teddy and Ben at the end! :D;D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.10.04 - 02:18AM Title: Chapter 10 Lol. Normal? Love Teddy. Poor Ben. Hope he will continue to fancy Thei despite her being a witch! Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.10.03 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 10 Thanks for the quick update! You've created an entire town of oddballs, so Harry's review of the suspects was welcome and a nice way to remind us all of who did what. Harry found what I feared he would, and my heart ached for him knowing he has his own heir still forming, but the scene between Ginny, Teddy and Ben was a hoot. I never imagined Teddy with leopard spots, but it cracked me up. Reviewer: loveepotter7 Signed Date: 2018.10.03 - 01:14PM Title: Chapter 10 amazing chapter again, loved the humour with teddy. can't wait for more xx Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.10.03 - 01:00PM Title: Chapter 10 Thank you for the suspects’ “family tree”. It really helps to read who’s who again (my memory is nothing to write home about). I love Ben getting introduced to magic. The bit of comedy balances the tragedy in the chapter. Can’t wait for more. | |||||||
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