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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.07.15 - 08:57PM Title: Chapter 2 When in doubt rock the casbah!!, Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 06:46AM Title: Chapter 2 Interesting way to murder someone. A few comments, if you don't mind. Hermione said there was nothing remarkable about the body, but if she was held captive and poisoned she would have been vomiting and dehydrated which would be evident in the exam. Milk sickness is a unique way to murder someone, but how could Hermione tell she'd had ten liters of milk in the last five days? It wouldn't all still be in her system. That just seemed a bit odd. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.05.07 - 02:19PM Title: Chapter 2 This was certainly an intriguing chapter! The number 1 on Cho is ominously indicative of a potential serial killer! Corner would be a good suspect if he hadn't apparently been in the states when the body was dumped, unless he had an accomplice! Using a poison from the States in milk would indicate the suspect has been to the States previously or could be someone with potions or pharmaceutical knowledge! Suspect would seem more likely to be muggle born or half blood since a muggle poison was used, possibly with a grudge toward magical people and or young women! A lot of possibilities and few answers! One thing is for sure - I can't wait for the next Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.05.05 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter 2 Yay! You’re back with another chapter! | |||||||
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