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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.05.22 - 02:53AM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like things are moving forward, both for Harry and Ginny's relationship and Harry's case. I'll be long forward to your next update.
Author's Response: The goal is to keep things move. I don't want pointless chapters where nothing important happens. I want the mixture of important and unimportant. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 09:14PM Title: Chapter 3
Ironies indeed! This one had more twists and turns than a good rollercoaster! I'm still a little dizzy! On the bad side, still no decent leads in the murder, but on the good side no other murders -- yet! Pretty much ruled out Corner as a suspect! I certainly have suspicions about the club - any patron could be a suspect! Can't wait to see what Sam and the camera say about Cho's activities in the club - she certainly had become a regular! Ginny and Harry's new relationship is moving swimmingly along! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a huge fan of irony, so just you wait!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 07:16PM Title: Chapter 3
"Randy" is the word that springs to mind.
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 11:00AM Title: Chapter 3
I would so watch this show! I can see all of this in my head, so I guess I'm already watching it...
Anyway... I love the interactions. I totally suck at mysteries*, so of course I thought Michael had something to do with it somehow. But now that we have The Ministry... I am all sorts of intrigued!
*I also forgot this was a non-magic story, so at first I was thinking "duh, he apparated and did it." Then I remembered. It's been a long week.
I'm hooked though. I can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: I've never written a real mystery, and something I've discovered is that if I can surprise myself then I will most likely surprise others. I'm currently written the story to a video game and while working on that I will think of something for this and just think, "Oh man, That's gonna be good!"
I glad to see you're enjoying the tale so far. Let me tell you there are some extreme shocks in the future! Don't worry however, the banter of Harry and Ginny will always be a constant, if the world goes to hell in a handbag.
