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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.07.20 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 2
A very fun and funny chapter! I loved the way Harry and Ginny banter, and her discussion with her team mates was priceless. Seems like things have really moved forward quickly for the two of them. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Banter is my favorite thing to work on while writing, so I'm glad it's appreciated! Thank you for the kind words
Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.07.19 - 01:34PM Title: Chapter 2
Wasn’t the last line from Ed Sheeran’s Shape of you?
(Also: OMG, that was hot! :-D )
Author's Response: Yes it was! I used the that song for inspiration for this story.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.07.16 - 02:19PM Title: Chapter 2
Well this chapter was a real hoot! Glad to see Ron and Hermoine get in on the fun! Ron seemed a little more laid back then usual! The fireworks are sure going off big time between Ginny and Harry! Can't wait to see where this goes! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! When I had to stop writing every so often to laugh at my own jokes while working on this.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.07.16 - 08:06AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. I had to grin (not only) about the great introduction of Hermione and Ron.
While I try to avoid all-you-can-eat restaurants in recent years, I'm pretty sure it must look like paradise for a Weasley, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! Next I want to drag in a few more Weasleys, have some fun with sibling banter!
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.07.15 - 09:58PM Title: Chapter 2
I really do love the banter you create between Ginny and Harry. And the sibling banter is great too. You have a gift.
I'll be interested to see just where this whirlwind takes our two...
Author's Response: Thank you! My favorite part of writing is dialog. Sometimes when I'm bored I just start creating banter in my head.
Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2018.07.15 - 12:07PM Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant going! I love the pace and te way the story is dishing out. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
