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Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.08.22 - 03:57AM Title: Chapter 4
Keep on like this, and I’m going to spontaneously combust. Love your cheeky Sirius, by the way!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Sirius is such a fun character to work with, thought I find him a bit of a challenge.
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2018.08.15 - 02:01PM Title: Chapter 4
Been lurking since you started this story, for this (and other things, admittedly) I am notorious. Nothing like a no plot of sexual tension with a helping of inconvenient distraction to act as a diffuser. You have been quite active on the site as of late, it has not gone unnoticed... It's been fun to watch your journey. I have always thought 'Dont look a gift horse in the mouth' was the expression. Don't shoot is an interesting take though too!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I personally have an issue reading some of my older stories now myself, having improved my grammar and story telling quite a bit. Oh and the horse quote... I've always messed up the correct wording of that, but somehow this time mine worked out fine lol.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.08.14 - 06:14PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh they are doomed....and Ginny may not be a harpy for very much longer...kutgw
Author's Response: If you've got enough nerve anything is possible and Ginny has quite a lot of nerve. I'm sure she can come up with a solution to her... problem lol
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.08.14 - 01:46PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it! I love how quickly they're finding themselves in love. They are aware of the speed, but upon introspection they aren't afraid of it. And I love how sweet Sirius was once he realized just how deep in Harry was. Seeing each other interact with Teddy probably just helps speed things along too.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully this story has several more chapters (since I know your original intent was to be done by now).
Author's Response: I think when you find that person, you just know... and fear kind takes a backseat. I have another few chapters in me yet. I just love the world!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.08.14 - 10:41AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you so much for another fun chapter. I loved it...and I don't miss the missing plot, lol.
On the one hand, I'm looking forward to the chapter, in which Ginny announces her success to her teammates, on the other hand, I hope it will take many more chapters until you'll post this scene, lol.
Author's Response: I know what you mean! Sometimes I think, "It's time." but then I'm like "No... just a little longer." lol. Thank you for the kind words!
Reviewer: Pottermum Signed Date: 2018.08.13 - 04:00AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter xx
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.08.12 - 09:06PM Title: Chapter 4
I have been reading this fic since the beginning, but I think this is my first review. LOVED this chapter. It’s everything sweet, and I’m enjoying seeing Harry and Ginny’s relationship progress.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you LOVED this chapter. I enjoy writing the emotional side of relationships... the inner thoughts, if you will, and this chapter is full of that.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.08.12 - 06:07PM Title: Chapter 4
Really delightful chapter especially with Ginny meeting SIrius and the adorable Teddy! Didn't take long for Teddy to win the hearts of both Ginny and Molly! Really enjoying this story! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Teddy is a little lady charmer lol. I really enjoy writing for this story, so I'm glad you enjoy reading it.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.08.12 - 11:08AM Title: Chapter 4
Sirius was certainly being himself this chapter! I was a bit disappointed that Harry and Ginny were interrupted, but I do enjoy seeing Harry and Teddy together. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for saying that about Sirius! I don't tend to write him, because I fear of messing up his charming personality, so I'm glad you thought he was on point.
