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Reviewer: FloreatCastellum Signed Date: 2018.09.14 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 8

You know what's really lovely about this chapter? The dialogue. You get casual conversation spot on. You're not afraid to include the little asides and slight tangents that make it authentic, and you get the level of banter just right that you genuinely feel like you're atbthe pub with friends.

I also applaud you for your characterisation of Harry, who has his anger come in uncontrollable outbursts and with a dash of self pitying. Ron played the part of soothing him too, it definitely feels true to the characters. Also I have such a soft spot for drunk Harry. I have this headcanon that he is an emotional drunk and I'm glad to see you agree.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.08.23 - 07:50PM Title: Chapter 8

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Lol. He pgotdrunk, alright. Good for him. He needs to be normal after Voldemort!

Author's Response: Harry really does deserve a normal life with his friends and family! Too bad we writers enjoy putting him in tough situations so much haha. Thank you for yet another review!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.08.22 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 8

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Interesting day and night but are we any closer to solving the murders? Nice updating.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Are we closer? Now that would be telling, wouldn't it?



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.08.22 - 09:27AM Title: Chapter 8

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I guess this was an in-between type of chapter or a calm before the storm! The exchange between the Aurors at the pub was a lot of fun and we got to know some them a little better! Can't wait to see what comes next! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! Good to know you liked it. Without betraying too much: there's definitely going to be a storm ;)




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