Reviews For On the Woodway
Reviewer: FloreatCastellum Signed Date: 2018.09.14 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 8 You know what's really lovely about this chapter? The dialogue. You get casual conversation spot on. You're not afraid to include the little asides and slight tangents that make it authentic, and you get the level of banter just right that you genuinely feel like you're atbthe pub with friends. Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.08.23 - 07:50PM Title: Chapter 8 Lol. He pgotdrunk, alright. Good for him. He needs to be normal after Voldemort! Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.08.22 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 8 Interesting day and night but are we any closer to solving the murders? Nice updating. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.08.22 - 09:27AM Title: Chapter 8 I guess this was an in-between type of chapter or a calm before the storm! The exchange between the Aurors at the pub was a lot of fun and we got to know some them a little better! Can't wait to see what comes next! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D | |||||||
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