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Reviewer: FloreatCastellum Signed Date: 2018.09.14 - 06:51PM Title: Chapter 12
And again, you get Harry spot on with lashing out and saying hurtful things when he's emotional. So many people turn him into this ever patient saint as an adult, but at the end of the day he is damaged.
I also love that nothing remarkable happened when he united the Hallows. Like DH, it's not the important thing here, And Harry has let his heart rule over his head so far.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.09.03 - 08:38AM Title: Chapter 12
The beginning was a little anti-climactic since the mysterious figure at the end of the last chapter didn't menace Harry or maybe it was one of his Aurors! Hate to see Harry get suspended - may be a big mistake on Kingsley's part! And what's going on with Claire?! Maybe the figure with the long blonde hair was a woman! Keep those chapters coming! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Yeah, the anti-climax is something I noticed as well. The thing is, I write everything in one continuous story, and only at the end do I cut it into individual chapters. This made the anti-climactic part stand out more than I anticipated. It should have been a hint that Harry has lost sight of what's important (see the bloodied lense, and Xeno's missing eye as well). Oh well, you live and you learn. Next chapter is the final one for now, and it's coming this Saturday!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.09.02 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank goodness he returned the stone back! All he has to do now is get rid of that wand! And talk. To Dumbledore ‘s portrait! Oh dear... How is Ron? What exactly is going on? Thanks for this quick update and looking forward to the next one. Poor Luna!
Author's Response: Glad you're looking forward to the next one! I'm afraid you're a bit too hopeful for everything to work out so easily, though :C
