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Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2020.08.26 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter 1

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That is seriously cute.

Don't know if that is an adjective you're going for...but it clearly is.

Thanks



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2019.05.14 - 05:16AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Epicrunze Signed Date: 2019.05.07 - 08:23PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Loveobsession Signed Date: 2019.01.18 - 07:14AM Title: Chapter 1

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Just started reading this story now and read through all of it in one sitting. Love when that happens. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you like love it!



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2018.11.16 - 10:05AM Title: Chapter 1

I just thought it through. Harry didn't want to use his fathers name. But if James is know internationally (Ginny's favorite player etc.) surely professionals should know the name Potter even better.

Also I'm not sure how much Ginny could know about James' playing style. In Wizarding world they used only wireless. And moving fotos in newspapers. Not much for picking favorite players in other continents' leagues.



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2018.11.15 - 01:57PM Title: Chapter 1

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I really liked the start of this story! Very well done.

I wouldn't call "Radioactive" good for running in any way. Maybe for the snail on a leisurely stroll. The cover by the Within Temptation would suite quite good though.





Author's Response: I can see that. I like using Radioactive as a start up then progress from there, but that's just me. Thank you for the kind words!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.11.12 - 03:43PM Title: Chapter 1

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Yea that’s all they need is a rump in the sheets...maybe then they can focus on more important things like the game....kutgw

Author's Response: Yes priorities are always so muddled when sex is involved.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.11.10 - 06:44PM Title: Chapter 1

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A happy read.



Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2018.11.10 - 03:38AM Title: Chapter 1

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A perfect start to what promises to be a very delightful and captivating read! Your stories have been very well written and coreographed so far. The characters are introduced at just the right pace and description as well as the way the plot and story progresses keep us panting for more all the while keeping us just on this side of the line of satisfaction so that we don't feel like we are abandoned! Very well done my friend and I hope to see more!

J. Jamie Dupane

Author's Response: Wow! Such high praise. Thank you so much! That means a lot to me. I've crafting this story for a while and I'm glad its holding the candle I thought it might.



Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2018.11.09 - 10:12PM Title: Chapter 1

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Great start. Very cute conversation at the end.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! That was my favorite bit to write. I made myself laugh writing that.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.11.09 - 08:06PM Title: Chapter 1

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Great to see a new one from you! Great AU plot line and wonderful start! Love all the banter between our favorite love duo! Can't wait to see where you are taking this! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you! Banter is my second language, only behind sarcasm. I have quite a bit planned out for this one so get ready!




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