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Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2019.03.04 - 02:46PM Title: Chapter 11

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I really like the way you write dialogue between the different characters. It reads very naturally. Also good that not everything went perfectly - be a bit boring if every match was won. Harry certainly got it spot on with the house surprise, and it sounds like he;s going to be well rewarded.

Author's Response: I wanted to make this chapter have a real feel to it. In life, nothing goes perfectly and having Ginny lose felt right. Thank you for the compliment on dialogue! That'ss my favorite part of writing, so I'm glad it comes out -- dare I say -- natural.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.03.01 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 11

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Well this one was a lot of fun! Interesting proposal by Harry and acceptance by Ginny! Glad their families approve! Love the surprise house for Ginny from Harry at the end! Va Va Va Voom! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.03.01 - 09:07AM Title: Chapter 11

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Well harry never had that insensitive to pack before...kutgw




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