Reviews For Natural
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2019.03.04 - 02:46PM Title: Chapter 11 I really like the way you write dialogue between the different characters. It reads very naturally. Also good that not everything went perfectly - be a bit boring if every match was won. Harry certainly got it spot on with the house surprise, and it sounds like he;s going to be well rewarded. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.03.01 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 11 Well this one was a lot of fun! Interesting proposal by Harry and acceptance by Ginny! Glad their families approve! Love the surprise house for Ginny from Harry at the end! Va Va Va Voom! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.03.01 - 09:07AM Title: Chapter 11 Well harry never had that insensitive to pack before...kutgw | |||||||
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