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Reviews For Path Diverged II

Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2020.01.06 - 09:02PM Title: Hogwarts Bound

LOVED Ginny rubbing it into Ron and Hermione when Harry wouldn't. That was classic GInny!

Author's Response: I laugh every time I reread that moment. I've never seen Ginny as one to hold things back, especially when she's right lol thank you!



Reviewer: blattgefluester Signed Date: 2020.01.06 - 07:04AM Title: Hogwarts Bound

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I loved how much Harry gave to hear that he is loved from adults in this chapter, especially the little moment with Arthur! Kind of glad Ginny said "I told you so" when Harry held back lol, Hermione never held back with "I told you so" either so now she's got the other side of the stick for once. I'm glad to see her be apologetic and appreciate that she realises her mistake despite it being a hard truth to admit that she (and Ron) thought of Harry's mind as messed up and forgot that he's still himself despite his current struggles. I liked that Ginny hang out with her friends some and didn't abandon them just because she's with Harry now and you brought across the uncomfortableness of the Slug Club meeting perfectly. I'm curious whether Dean will leave it be or whether he'll approach Ginny as well (or Harry again) and I'm also really excited to see what you'll do with Malfoy's many failed assassination attempts now that Harry promised Sirius not to go after Malfoy alone and try to stop him as well as Romilda's love potion attempts on Harry, now that Ginny is involved. I'm really excited to be back at Hogwarts, I hope you'll aslo treat us with some good Quidditch practice Harry and Ginny interaction as well as some good Quidditch games on top of the more important plot points. HBP was full of teenage relationship drama on top of the angst and criminal detective aspect as well so I'm interested to see how'll far you'll go with that lol. Now that I figured out my problem with submitting reviews on here thanks to Gin110881 I'm looking forward to leaving reviews on here once again, another great chapter, looking forward to the next one :) x

Author's Response: I like to think Ginny's proclamation earlier in the story that Harry has never had anyone express their love for him has impacted the lovely adults. He deserves to hear it from everyone who cares about him. I laugh every time I reread that little moment of Ginny's "I told you so" to Harry and Hermione. She's not one to hold back lol and Hermione completely deserves to be on the other side of that. We'll be seeing Hermione continue to struggle with admitting when she's wrong, but I thought this was an important moment where she realized Harry really needed that apology from her and Ron. HBP mentions Ginny being with friends enough that I thought we deserved to actually be more aware of them. Plus Ginny did spend her whole summer with Harry. It's nice to be able to just be with friends sometimes. Dean is going to be a bit annoying while he figures things out, but it won't drag on for too long. I've already plotted out changes to one of the failed assassination attempts, and I'm still considering the next one after that (it was just the necklace and the mead iirc). I'm working on a Quidditch practice scene right now that might get a bit steamy (not too much though, I want to keep my PG-13 rating!). Thanks!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.01.05 - 08:07PM Title: Hogwarts Bound

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Home indeed! Interesting train ride for all! Slughorn is certainly a stuffed shirt but well meaning! Glad Sirius got everything set straight with the crew about keeping an eye on Dorko! Can't wait to see what's next! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I don't do boring train rides where nothing happens lol Slughorn is every bit the man we got to know in the books. It's fun to write him. Sirius's knowledge and sharing of that knowledge is definitely going to have an impact on things moving forward. Thank you!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.01.04 - 09:15PM Title: Hogwarts Bound

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Home but not in Kansas any more Toto....kutgw

Author's Response: It's nice to be back at Hogwarts! Thanks!




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