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Reviews For Path Diverged II

Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2020.08.09 - 10:33PM Title: Dobby's Report

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You've done a nice job with this rather diverse chapter. One moment, Harry's brooding about a flashback and the next he's a bit euphoric over Dobbie's report. I like that with each chapter, you're bringing the climax just a little bit closer. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2020.08.02 - 09:38PM Title: Dobby's Report

Great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!



Reviewer: Huskerkeeg Signed Date: 2020.08.02 - 07:10PM Title: Dobby's Report

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Amazing as always. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.08.01 - 09:47AM Title: Dobby's Report

Don't forget the mosquito repellent!!! ;0 :D :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Haha we were up on a high ridge, so no mosquitoes, but there were a TON of grasshoppers in the area. Couldn't take two steps without having them try to get out of your way or accidentally smack into you, but other than that, it was a good trip!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.08.01 - 06:39AM Title: Dobby's Report

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Well at lease harry and company are figuring stuff out quicker, but not the full answerYet...as for harry having a landmind when he did was great timing, but shows he has made progress but Ginny is still his best way out of the hole....kutgw

Author's Response: Lots of things are being figured out more quickly for sure, but there are some answers which will take longer than others to figure out. Some landmines are larger than others, and there's no way to know for sure what the next one will be like, but Harry has definitely made great progress, and Ginny is going to do all she can to be there for him when he needs help the most. Thank you!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.07.31 - 08:38PM Title: Dobby's Report

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Great job by Dobby! Glad Harry made it thru the mess at herbology class! Ginny has a way of always making Harry feel better! Moldydork has no
chance against such love! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Ginny is very gifted at getting through to Harry when he really needs it. Thank you!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2020.07.31 - 02:29PM Title: Dobby's Report

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Oh, I really felt for Harry in this one. Not only is Voldemort taunting him with his actual past, but preying on normal teenage anxieties, too. It's so unfair. I'm glad the others stuck by him and pointed out the untruthfulness. He probably will have to face him again, but he'll never be truly alone.

Author's Response: It's definitely unfair. Voldemort did a lot of lasting damage that night in the first story, but one thing I've learned is that the idea of time healing all wounds is a bit ridiculous. I've had unexpected setbacks multiple times in my own life as I've worked to recover from trauma, and I really wanted to highlight what that's like. I also wanted to make it clear what a strong support system he has with his friends, and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!




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