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Reviewer: NowImYourDaisy Signed Date: 2021.01.16 - 12:56PM Title: Prologue

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Hmm, this is an interesting narrative. Iā€™m excited and intrigued by the past in this story as well as where it will lead! Great work!

Author's Response: I hope you enjoyed my story.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2020.10.20 - 06:42PM Title: Prologue

Fascinating beginning. I really like the premise of this story. A very unique take on the wrong BWL.

Author's Response: Thank you.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2019.07.17 - 11:41PM Title: Prologue

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I'm so glad you're back and writing a multi-chapter fic. You had me on the edge of my seat during the meeting scene. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I can keep it good for everyone!



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2019.07.15 - 09:33PM Title: Prologue

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Love the new story!! I'm always searching for WBWL stories that make sense. Poor Harry - it seems he was ignored by so many. I'm glad he has Sirius and at least some of the Weasleys on his side. Can't wait to see where this is going.

As a childhood cancer survivor and a former pediatric oncology nurse, my heart goes out to you and your family. I hope your son continues to do well and your family continues to heal.

-Sharon

Author's Response: I know how you feel. The thing that always bugs me is that everyone is cruel to him or ignores except for Ginny, but I wanted to try something a little different with the excuse to explore his relationship with his godfather. Thank you for your kind words. I had no idea you were a survivor of cancer, that is just amazing. Hopefully, fingers crossed, my son will also be one, but right now, his future is uncertain.



Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2019.07.15 - 01:13PM Title: Prologue

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Very interesting start ... so many digressions from canon, yet holding true to much of the original plot line. I am excited to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am happy I have managed that already!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.07.15 - 08:29AM Title: Prologue

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What an intriguing start!
I resist the temptation to have a peek into Yandrak's story to find out how things will continue. I think I read the summary of this story years ago, but never the story itself.
I'm glad to hear that things have improved in your real life and you are back to your old hobby. I hope I'll soon find out what Lily's words were.

Author's Response: If it helps, I have made major changes to the story as a whole. I just took the basic idea and the plot twist, which had captured my attention to begin with. As for Lily's words, well, there will be a wait for that, but we will get there.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2019.07.14 - 11:36AM Title: Prologue

Good to see you writing again. Hope things continue to go well for your family.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.07.10 - 08:11PM Title: Prologue

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Well when you screw up a cake you have to take the conquer as well...they all screwed up and the fact molly is ok with it shocks me...kutgw

Author's Response: Molly being ok with everything will be explained, but that is not going to be till around, I want to say Chapter 5, but can't remember without checking my notes!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.07.10 - 02:14PM Title: Prologue

Incidentally, Mrs. Auror and I have your son and your family in out prayers! :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.07.10 - 12:02PM Title: Prologue

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Great to see a new one from you CharmH! Shock and confused is right! Loved the start and the plot! Glad to see all the marauders alive and kicking but hate that Lilly isn't! Surprised that James was kept in the dark! Can't wait for Harry to show up and I have a sneaking suspicion that Ginny is with him! Can't wait to see where this one goes! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: The original story that I adapted it from did have Lily alive, but I just couldn't justify having behaving in a way that would make Harry feel forgotten - that is one of my biggest issues with WBWL stories. But, it gave me a chance to explore the relationship between Harry and Sirius instead. Be patient though, you need to wait before we see our favourite pair!




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