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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2020.06.08 - 04:32PM Title: Shared Secrets

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I really like the friends that Harry has gathered around himself. I think he's a bit too kind to James and Matt - especially James. He basically abandoned one son in favor of the other. Sirius is an amazing substitute father for him. I'm so glad that Harry was able to talk to Lily - I can only imagine how that comforted him.

I hope your son is doing well!

Author's Response: I am trying to find a balance between Harry being too kind and being too angry. He has made mistakes too, but I promise when they do confront one another properly (Chapter 9), it won't be immediate forgiveness, hugs and happiness.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.06.07 - 08:30PM Title: Shared Secrets

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Well sometimes a sledgehammer works better then a claw hammer....kutgw

Author's Response: That is true!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.06.07 - 08:14PM Title: Shared Secrets

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Harry 1 Moldydork 0! Glad everything went according to plan and all are okay! Glad Harry has Ginny to support him! Never would have thought Dorko could have a decent bone in his body but miracles do happen! Wouldn't have expected a humble Dumble! Will be interested to see how James reacts to this! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: WBWL stories always seem to go one way with Harry's parents hating him and Dumbledore wanting full control, so I wanted to go a different route. We know Dumbledore has admitted to making mistakes with Harry, so I took my cue from that.




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