Reviews For Second Chances and First Occasions
Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2019.08.22 - 11:56PM Title: An Editorial Conclusion
I love it! What a fun approach, and a great set up for what really could have been a long story - Iām on board!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2019.08.21 - 02:02AM Title: An Editorial Conclusion
I really like this story and the changes you've made to the original plot. While I realize this is a Challenge story and needed to end when it did, it would have been delightful to see how you would have had Harry handle Fudge and Delores Umbridge, assuming that you're still semi-following the plot of the original books to give Harry time to mature and enjoy being a teenager. My biggest concern with this is how Harry and Dumbledore plan to rid Harry of his personal Horcrux. Do they wait for Voldemort to cast the Killing Curse as happens in DH? You didn't say how they would tackle that particular tricky problem in the summary. Overall, well done.
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2019.08.20 - 06:31PM Title: An Editorial Conclusion
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 06:47PM Title: An Editorial Conclusion
Great story for this challenge!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 04:59PM Title: An Editorial Conclusion
Definitely an different concept for this story and an interesting read! A little anti-climactic tho! Wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this to see what happens! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 11:17AM Title: Having a Ball
Lovely!!! And, I just realized it's a short story marked complete for the First Time challenge - my Sunday morning brain is clearly not awake yet ;) Anyways, very well done!!!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 11:09AM Title: Ridiculous, Awkward and Mental
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, but I must admit feeling uneasy about the fact that the real Alastor is still apparently trapped in his trunk. Hope Albus gets the ball rolling and frees him soon!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 11:01AM Title: Dress Robes
Oh, such a sweet interaction between Harry and Ginny! I also love the way Hermione handles Ron ;)
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 10:51AM Title: A Meeting in Memory
Sharing all this info with Albus made me a bit nervous, but judging by his statement at the end, it was the correct decision. By the way, in the very last sentence, I believe you meant to put "Then, since you and I are apparently...." You left off the I.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 10:44AM Title: Friends First
Well done, Harry!!! I'm glad he asked Ginny to the Ball, and her response was perfect :)
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2019.08.18 - 10:36AM Title: The King's Cross Choice and Transfiguration
Very promising start!!!