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Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2020.10.21 - 08:34AM Title: An Unexpected Find

Very believable beginning to their growing closeness and Harry’s confusion. I’m glad the locket issue is being sorted now. And I’m still wondering about the Potter’s decisions regarding wards. I am guessing it will be revealed at some point.

Author's Response: Yes, the wards will brought up again. The wards I chose for the cottage Sirius and Harry live in, for me, were the last resort, the most extreme ones and they didn't want to use them unless their hand was forced, which was, in the end, their deaths. Even then, in my head, these are wards that take time and money to create.



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2020.09.19 - 07:48PM Title: An Unexpected Find

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Love the slightly different twist on Grimmauld Place! I'm glad Harry is getting the chance to make friends. Its helpful that Kreacher shares his story now. Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2020.09.19 - 01:59PM Title: An Unexpected Find

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Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I'm glad Harry and Ginny are getting closer, and I won't mind if it'll take a bit before they recognize their feelings. After all, they're just 13 and 14. On the other hand, that's the age we started dating when I was younger, lol.
I'm pretty curious if and how the locket will speed things up once they find out what it really is ...

Author's Response: I have mapped out the next several chapters and chosen a point for them to admit their feelings, but yes, it is several chapters away! As for the locket, won't speed things up currently, but does help me set up my plan for the Department of Mysteries.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2020.09.17 - 06:03AM Title: An Unexpected Find

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So, they have found the locket already! I'm curios how this is going to impact their plans going forward? In the mean time, i enjoyed Harry and Ginny's interaction. Despite his growing attraction to her, Harry doesn't seem to recognize what he is feeling for Ginny yet.

Author's Response: Honestly? Right now, it isn't going to move the search forward any quicker, but it does help set up how I want to approach the Department of Mysteries Battle.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.09.16 - 09:05PM Title: An Unexpected Find

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And the hits just keep on coming...latterly this time...kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you.



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2020.09.16 - 01:12AM Title: An Unexpected Find

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It's good to see this update.

Thank you...

Author's Response: Thank you



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.09.15 - 08:31PM Title: An Unexpected Find

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Well that was an interesting turn of events. That is a horcrux Kreacher was protecting, of course! Glad Harry and Ginny are together and leaning on each other. Can't wait til they discover their love for each other! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: You are going to be waiting a bit for them to admit their feelings for one another. I just don't know how many chapters you are going to have to wait for it.




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