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Reviewer: TheHallowsInMe31 Signed Date: 2022.06.28 - 05:39AM Title: Fourteen
There goes Hermione, spying on people again lol. It seems kind of bittersweet the way Harry is dreaming of Ginny, especially if he never wakes up. I'm glad Ron is finally starting to get his head out of his ass. Hopefully, he continues to wisen up and not revert back to being a massive dick.
Author's Response: All I will say about Hermione is that she just has to have the answers... NOW! Harry is still deeply in love with Ginny, so why shouldn't he be dreaming of her? It's nice that you approve of Ron starting to get his act together. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2020.09.10 - 09:47PM Title: Fourteen
It seems the key to Hermione’s heart is Starbucks and good conversations, not concerts. Good to see Ginny and Ron make up and for Ginny to get some perspective on her relationship with Harry.
Author's Response: Actually, I think the key to Hermione's heart is understanding and patience. Neville has both in spades and at this stage in their lives, they have a mutual interest in helping Harry heal and that's what draws Hermione and Neville together. As for Ginny and Ron, it was about time and Ginny just needs to be patient for all to be clear. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2020.09.06 - 03:54PM Title: Fourteen
I hope Harry and Ginny get back together. Write another chapter soon!
Author's Response: I just posted chapter fifteen, so you'll know what's happening to Harry and Ginny and how close they're getting to reuniting. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.09.02 - 05:52AM Title: Fourteen
Well I have to say we all are on a journey when he are healing and it’s nice to see Ginny and harry are starting to recover, but it looks like a long road ahead for them both...kutgw
Author's Response: The journey might be shorter than you think. There are only six chapters left in the story, so something has to happen soon. Don't you agree? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2020.09.01 - 09:47AM Title: Fourteen
Ah, and everything is becoming right in the world. I love how after all the concern and expectations about Harry's awakening, he's just calm and cool as a cucumber. I love the hints that something's not quite right with the memory charm, too. This is such a fabulous romance. Well done!!
Author's Response: You're right. After all the angst, healing is taking place and our favorite characters are beginning to find their way back to each other. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 08:01PM Title: Fourteen
Wait! Ron, apologizing and even gave Ginny some good advice? I think I may faint! Good to see him growing up! Interesting match Hermoine with Neville! Now if Harry could just get his head out of the clouds and back to reality! He and Ginny need each other big time! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: I agree with everything you said! I've always thought that Ron and Ginny (whether Muggle or magical) were very close growing up. They would have to be in the face of the twin terrors, Fred and George! I see them as relying on each other for friendship and, as they grew older, a sounding board for hopes and dreams. That's why Ron felt easy enough to offer his opinion and Ginny to take it. I liked pairing Hermione and Neville together because in canon, Neville felt comfortable asking Hermione for help with his homework in books 1 and 2. Without Ron, Neville's calming influence helps ground Hermione so that they compliment each other. Besides, Neville understands what she's going through at Harry's bedside; all this is why I thought they'd make a good couple. So... now that Harry is awake, future chapters will be quite interesting. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 07:48PM Title: Fourteen
Good fight.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun putting it together using all of the skills Harry learned while at Hogwarts.
Reviewer: 133112 Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 10:32AM Title: Fourteen
Great job with this one! Can't wait till next sunday!
Author's Response: So glad you're looking forward to chapter fifteen. See you next week!
Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 07:37AM Title: Fourteen
That was a very satisfying battle scene :) . I'm liking Neville and Hermione in this fic too. Feels right :)
Okay. I now await the reunification of Harry and Ginny! Bring it on!
Author's Response: The battle scene was fun to write. I always make a list of what I want to happen during a battle and then take on the challenge of turning that list into something exciting and readable. So glad you agree with me that pairing Neville with Hermione feels right for the situation. Now that Harry is awake, and I'm a romantic at heart, you know I'll bring Harry and Ginny back together by the end. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 06:45AM Title: Fourteen
A lot happening in this chapter! I'm glad that Ron and Ginny were able to reconcile - he might actually be growing up. It's sad that it took so long for him to acknowledge his mistakes and Ginny was very generous in accepting his apology right away. Its good that realises something was off with this 'fight' she had with Harry.
Hermione and Neville do seem quite good together. Its easy to see why Harry and Hermione have such a close relationship. They went through so much together. I was a bit irked at her spying on Ginny. I think she very much under estimates what they meant to each other - I could be wrong, but she's probably never seen Harry in love before and she seems to think he'll just get over it when he wakes up.
Voldemort's demise was much more bloody and hard fought. You killed Professor McGonagall?!
It is just like Harry to do the unexpected and simply wake up!
Author's Response: Yes, I killed Professor McGonagall last chapter! It wasn't as much fun as killing Voldemort, but how else could I have her portrait in Harry's house? I'm glad you approve of Harry simply waking up. I'm glad you approve of Neville and Hermione as a couple. They understand and support each other just as Harry and Hermione do, but on a more romantic level. There will be more of Hermione and Neville in future chapters. Now that Harry is awake, Ginny's dreams and recollections will be more at war with what Harry made her think and things will progress towards a romantic ending for those two. Finally, I'm glad you approve of Ron growing up enough to apologize to his sister. They need each other and the rift between them was causing their family a lot of unnecessary pain. It was time they reconciled. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 06:33AM Title: Fourteen
I'm glad Ginny did the first step to talk to Ron again. He can be lucky that Ginny is so easy-forgiving. I wonder if Patty had something to do with the change of his mind.
It's a good thing that Hermione is taking care of Harry so well. After all, she's been the only family he's had for the last few years. And don't think she's nosy, she's just doing what family would do. It's a bit hypocrite to call her nosy when she's looking after Harry when nothing has happened to him, but blame her when she didn't check on him in time when something has happened to him. But it's good that she now has Neville. Hopefully, he'll distract her a bit from Harry. Though, I think Harry will need Hermione for the foreseeable future. As devastated as he is, he will not get out of bed anytime soon.
I'm curious who will take the first step, Harry or Ginny. I think it's Harry's turn. While Ginny overreacted a bit, she was unprepared, while Harry was the one in control. Well, he should have been, lol. Hexing Ginny proved that he wasn't. Anyway, I guess Ginny will blame herself badly if she finds out what had happened to Harry, even if I think it's unjustified.
Author's Response: Actually, it was Ron being sacked that finally shook some sense into him! Patti had nothing to do with it. He finally realized that he'd thrown away nearly three years of friendship with his sister because of his stupidity and willingness to say hurtful things and while she may have opened the line of communication between them, he was the one to begin repairing their relationship by apologizing. Hermione has a unique role in Harry's life. They will never be romantically linked, but they do love each other as brother and sister, mostly because of all the time they spent together during the war. After the battle with Voldemort, Harry needed someone to represent him when he couldn't represent himself, so Hermione took on that role. Over the last six months, she's seen her role shrink as Harry mends through Ginny's love and then takes a big step backwards when he Obliviates her, therefore shoving poor Hermione back into the more intense role as his advocate. I'm glad you approve of Neville keeping her company. She needs his support. Finally, I think you'll find that both Harry and Ginny advance towards each other equally in coming chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Gryffinclaw_31 Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 04:57AM Title: Fourteen
Wow! I have so much to say! Neville and Hermione! And Ginny and Ron- I'm so glad for that. It was nice knowing the background about Harry's injuries, and Voldemort's defeat. Ginny's doubts make me want to just read the next chapter! Amazing!
Author's Response: Chapter fifteen will go up on schedule next Monday. I'm glad you approve of Neville and Hermione. She needed someone who understands what it's like to sit at a friend's bedside. You, and all of my other readers, seem very happy that Ron apologized to Ginny. It felt good to write that scene and also to explain about the final battle between Harry and Voldemort. Thanks for being a great reviewer.
Reviewer: Nomek1012 Signed Date: 2020.08.31 - 03:28AM Title: Fourteen
Finally Harry wakes up! Yay! As for Hermione in this story idk I'm not sure I like her sneaky ness. I get why she does it. I just dont like it. Super happy to see Ron and Ginny making amends. I really hope he finds a good job! Oh and hinny reunite!
Author's Response: I've thought a lot about Hermione's role in this story. When it first starts, she is basically Harry's only contact with the outside world until he meets Ginny. Hermione brings Harry his meals, sees that he takes his potions, makes sure he hasn't fallen down the stairs, all the stuff a nurse would do. Then, as Harry gets better he doesn't need her quite so much and because she doesn't know he's befriended Ginny, she does things that he doesn't like instead of talking to him. I think her spying on him and Ginny comes from her natural curiosity, but I do admit that she takes it a bit too far. Maybe, now that Harry is awake and she has Neville to concentrate on, she'll stop being quite so nosy. Also, I'm glad Ron and Ginny made up. It was time. There's more about Ron in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and writing to me. See you next week!
