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Reviews For That red dress

Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2020.07.30 - 05:56AM Title: That red dress

so cute



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.07.03 - 08:58PM Title: That red dress

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Wiped and well trained harry....kutgw



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2020.07.03 - 02:53AM Title: That red dress

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This is a delightful little story, but I have one question... do you have an aversion to using quotation marks? This is the first story I've ever read that uses hyphens and dashes to show people's conversation. It took away my enjoyment of the story until I became used to them.

That said, it was sweet that Harry tried to take Ginny somewhere posh and I have a feeling the two will laugh at their experience for years to come. They're lucky that Ginny didn't want tete du veau or boiled cows head or garlic confit, a spread made of garlic cloves boiled in oil. I bet that salad she ordered was worth a pretty Knut! Good thing they settled for comfort and pizza at Harry's flat.

Author's Response: Hi! I had no idea people were bothered by the hyphens. I’ve written other stories for other sites with hyphens and nobody ever pointed that out for me before. Thank you for leaving your opinion! I’ll definitely consider writing with quotation marks next time. I’m not very used to it but I noticed most of the five use it. That being said, In glad you enjoyed the story and agreed with the ending!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.07.02 - 11:47AM Title: That red dress

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Nice story for your first one! Ginny is definitely a feisty one but I would call her a devil in a red dress! I think Harry and Ginny shouuld
have opted for the pizza idea in the first place! Hope that wasn't escargot they ordered! Well done! :D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You’re so kind! This is my first Hinny fic and I’m glad you enjoyed it. I agree with you, they should’ve just ordered a pizza in the first place.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You’re so kind! This is my first Hinny fic and I’m glad you enjoyed it. I agree with you, they should’ve just ordered a pizza in the first place.




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