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Reviewer: tapik Signed Date: 2024.03.28 - 04:01PM Title: Hope
I would say that the Ginny's cut between coma and fully functional is too sharp.
Reviewer: Loony_Lovegood_216 Signed Date: 2020.11.18 - 12:58AM Title: Hope
I read this all in one go, and I don't regret it, despite a slight headache from reading.
I have two things to say: One: This is very good so far and I will say I'm very disappointed for not coming here later so I don't have to wait for the next chapter.
Secondly: You're an evil writer- the angst, suspense!- but you haven't killed too many yet, so I'm happy.
Author's Response: Well, I'm certainly glad you're here now! I love hearing people's thoughts while I'm still in the writing process. Updates are on Thursdays, so you don't have long to wait for the next one! I'm glad you're enjoying it - and yes, I do love the suspense, lol.
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2020.11.14 - 02:03PM Title: Hope
Brilliant. I was surprised how quickly Ginny recovered her faculties - isn't magic wonderful! Love George - even flying solo he manages to be funny.
Author's Response: Magic is brilliant, although you'll see in the next chapter that she's not completely over it yet.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.11.14 - 06:01AM Title: Hope
Well I’m glad to see Ginny is on the mend but harry is going to show up whether he has a fever or not....I’m not sure even Kingsley could stop him....kutgw
Author's Response:
I think Harry wouldn't care about himself, but he'd never do anything to harm Ginny or Ron. That was my take, anyway.
Reviewer: PikkuNika Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 03:17PM Title: Hope
She made it!!! And Ron too, of course!!!
This was a very nice chapter and was especially welcome after a never-ending day of work (in fact, still working after over 12h, but I needed a break!).
Author's Response:
I'm happy it could be something nice at the end of a long day rather than more angst, then! LOL. I do like writing the angsty stuff!
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 02:44PM Title: Hope
She’s finally awake! I have a theory on who is the instigator, but it assumes that a certain person managed to avoid Azkaban
Author's Response:
Ooh, I'm wondering who your theory is!!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 01:38PM Title: Hope
This chapter was sure a picker-upper! So happy Ginny is awake and she and Ron are recovering! Harry sure did pick a rotten time to get sick. Can't wait for the reunion between him and Ginny! The one with the Weasleys should be a goodie too! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Yes, Harry has been burning the candle at both ends for too long, and it finally caught up with him. You'll get the reunion next chapter, though.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 10:13AM Title: Hope
Yeah!! So glad Ginny is awake! I loved the conversation between the two siblings. Why is everyone blaming Harry for getting sick? Stress can make you irritable and such, but I don't think it can give you a sore throat, nausea, and a fever. I agree he should take better care of himself, but they are actually blaming him for being sick. That's awful. They aren't blaming Ginny or Ron, so why are they blaming Harry? Mr and Mrs Weasley are very sweet, worrying about Harry. I can imagine Mrs Weasley getting so upset, but come on its not personal. She must realize at some point, her love and chicken soup won't cut it. Glad all of the other Weasleys are doing well.
Author's Response:
I didn't think of it as blaming him, more of a sibling teasing. They'd warned him he needed to take care of himself. Personally, I think Mrs. Weasley's love and chicken soup is one of the best medicine's of all.
Reviewer: Kim Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 06:26AM Title: Hope
Yes, such a happy chapter! Love the banter between all of them!
Can't wait for the big reunion
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Harry and Ginny will get to talk in the next chapter. Promise.
Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 06:05AM Title: Hope
Yay!!! (too tired for more ...) YAY!!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry you're tired, but thanks very much for taking time to let me know you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: aurorasky Signed Date: 2020.11.13 - 05:56AM Title: Hope
YES!! Ginny woke up! I do like that this is completely different from muggle dementia apparently. My next question is will Harry be able to hunt down the people who did this or at least help bring it to a close? Since I know that you are mirroring our RL situation which is nice but I would like to see him get in on the action and not be stuck inside.
Author's Response: Yes, its quite different from Muggle Dementia as it can be cured - something I wish was real. As to your question, yes, the next phase of the story will be Harry hunting down those responsible. It was at about this point in writing that I was absolutely fed up with our own isolation, so this story needed to go in a different direction. I hope you enjoy it.
