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Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2020.09.17 - 06:19PM Title: An End and A Beginning

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While I love this story and your writing, I am pretty upset with Harry at this point. He is quite right in leaving Alice for Ginny, but he needs to get on with it. I can understand not ending things at the Burrow. It was a holiday for both of them, and Alice was surrounded by his friends and family, not her own. But now, he can’t act like a single man when he’s not yet. And he doesn’t even respect her enough to tell her he won’t be home for dinner. And that kiss is going to make the Daily Prophet.

Sorry! I honestly do love your story. I hope Harry behaves better in the next chapter.

Author's Response: If I'm honest, that is kind of the point. Harry acting this way is perhaps a little out of character for him, but that is the story as it, I think that there were other issues that we don't really see in this story that perhaps also influenced his decision but he still does her wrong. But that doesn't excuse his actions. I think that he truly did think of saying something, but after that kiss got wrapped up and in some ways stopped caring (though we don't see outright). Thank you so much for all these reviews they truly mean a great deal!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.09.17 - 05:59AM Title: An End and A Beginning

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Poor Alice if she can’t read this by now she is going to be in for a nasty surprise... kutgw

Author's Response: We will see, we will see. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.09.16 - 08:06PM Title: An End and A Beginning

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That was a nice series of events for Harry and Ginny! Leave it to Mione to see right thru his subterfuge! Harry really needs to break it off with clueless Alice! He and Ginny clearly belong together! (Several sunlit days it was) Nice chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: It was indeed! And of course she would, she knows them both very well. And he will don't worry, the next chapter is the last chapter. Thanks for the review!




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