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Reviews For The Hunter

Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2021.02.10 - 03:04AM Title: II.

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This is another enjoyable chapter. Thank you. I’m having a difficult time getting a feel for Harry and Ginny’s relationship, but look forward to seeing where you take them. They seem extremely close based upon Harry’s willingness to disregard Auror rules on confidentiality, and they seem to share a hot kiss, but otherwise the relationship seems a bit chaste. I’m not sure I can see them just sitting quietly and snippy hot chocolate ... but that’s probably just me. One grammatical thought, and iit happens twice . I’ll only bore you with one example. You say Harry relaxes deeper. It might just be my upbringing, but I think it should read “Harry relaxed more deeply.” It’s not a big deal, but it broke the rhythm I had going at the time. Thanks again! Nice job!

Author's Response: Hello Tom! I'm so honoured by the long review, it's such a pleasure! As for their relationship, this was my second chapter- ever! I've learned somewhat, and the cuddly bit, I've always been a bit fond of it, but I hope you'll see more of it in the future chapters! The grammar part, I must admit, I didn't notice it, but I promise I'll check it out, and I hope it's a bit better in the coming chapters, my grammar checker didn't pick it, but I'll keep that in mind. Lastly, thank you so much for the review, and I do hope I'll hear more from you!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.10.15 - 08:59PM Title: II.

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Well we still have a mystery gang...shag scoby you go to the leaky cauldron and check for clues...Val day and I will look in the library for stuff on the hunter......kutgw

Author's Response: Haha! Scooby-Doo! I'm glad you compared my works to the likes to those masterpieces! Do come back in two weeks for the next clues! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2020.10.15 - 07:18PM Title: II.

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I can understand why Harry is so tired if he's learning wandless magic, staying up until all hours working on his case and conferring with his colleagues about merging two cases. I'm glad he and Ginny were able to have dinner together. It beats eating alone and helps him relax in a way he can't while alone.

You might want to take a second look at the paragraph in which he gets out of bed to let in the owl. There's a swear word that really should be replaced by another word if you want the sentence to read correctly.

Overall, a nice chapter. I look forward to the next one.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the bit about Harry's wandless magic, I always thought of him to have it, tough maybe not by birth. I think if there's anyone who can force Harry to loosen up a bit, it's Ginny. Thank you so very much for informing me, I can't believe I missed that, it obviously was not what I meant to say, the next chapter would be up in two weeks! Thanks a lot for reviewing!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.10.13 - 08:14PM Title: II.

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Sure wondering about who or what the hunter is - kinda like Harry is! Glad he got some time with Ginny - looks like he's gonna be needing it! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Harry! That's an interesting aspect to it! You'll just have to wait for a bit to find out, I'm so glad you liked Ginny's introduction! Thank you for always reviewing.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2020.10.13 - 04:44PM Title: II.

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It is developing, but there is a lot to know yet. Keep it coming. Interesting plot.

Author's Response: Do keep coming back! The fun is yet to begin! Thanks for the review!




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