Reviews For The Hunter
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2021.02.10 - 03:04AM Title: II. This is another enjoyable chapter. Thank you. I’m having a difficult time getting a feel for Harry and Ginny’s relationship, but look forward to seeing where you take them. They seem extremely close based upon Harry’s willingness to disregard Auror rules on confidentiality, and they seem to share a hot kiss, but otherwise the relationship seems a bit chaste. I’m not sure I can see them just sitting quietly and snippy hot chocolate ... but that’s probably just me. One grammatical thought, and iit happens twice . I’ll only bore you with one example. You say Harry relaxes deeper. It might just be my upbringing, but I think it should read “Harry relaxed more deeply.” It’s not a big deal, but it broke the rhythm I had going at the time. Thanks again! Nice job! Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.10.15 - 08:59PM Title: II. Well we still have a mystery gang...shag scoby you go to the leaky cauldron and check for clues...Val day and I will look in the library for stuff on the hunter......kutgw Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2020.10.15 - 07:18PM Title: II. I can understand why Harry is so tired if he's learning wandless magic, staying up until all hours working on his case and conferring with his colleagues about merging two cases. I'm glad he and Ginny were able to have dinner together. It beats eating alone and helps him relax in a way he can't while alone. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.10.13 - 08:14PM Title: II. Sure wondering about who or what the hunter is - kinda like Harry is! Glad he got some time with Ginny - looks like he's gonna be needing it! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2020.10.13 - 04:44PM Title: II. It is developing, but there is a lot to know yet. Keep it coming. Interesting plot. | |||||||
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