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Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2021.02.10 - 03:20AM Title: III.

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Well, the bodies are stacking up! Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad to see your excitement! I hope you like the next 8 chapters! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2020.11.16 - 03:19AM Title: III.

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You have a flare for the gruesome! Harry's right about it being similar to a horror movie with the blood, slicing curse in the wand and the blacked-out rooms. The younger "mistress" is rather creepy, too. Well done.

Author's Response: The young mistress may or may not crop up again, but I have to admit that my writing was influenced by a few classic short-stories, thank you for the praise! See you soon.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2020.10.30 - 07:26AM Title: III.

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Interesting. No obvious connection between the deaths, just Harry's gut feeling which is usually right. I like how you are dropping tiny details about his home life into the story, gradually building up a picture..

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the tiny home bits, I try to make him seem more relatable and normal. Connections are not obvious, but some may be there! Upcoming chapters will offer more clarity! It made me so happy to see you found it interesting and thanks for the review! See you in two weeks.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2020.10.27 - 07:51PM Title: III.

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All very interesting so far. We need a few more clues.

Author's Response: I'm glad you came back, all the many clues will start to surface now, very soon, thanks a lot for the review!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.10.27 - 05:44PM Title: III.

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A very strange murder of a seemingly harmless old lady! Something weird is going on and I hope Harry figures it our soon! Proudfoot isn't much help but he's a real character! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Proudfoot should be more help soon, it is indeed weird, and Harry should take some time to figure it out, do keep coming back to find out! Thank you for the enthusiastic review.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.10.27 - 03:23PM Title: III.

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Im not sure where they are at in the mystery but it is a foot.....now we need to see the clues and work out where you are going from here...kutgw

Author's Response: And new clues you shall receive, very soon! They are not very close to the answer but I'm glad to hear that you're interested! Thanks for reviewing, and the next clues are up soon!




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