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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2021.05.13 - 04:29AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm a little confused by the meaning of the final prophecy "the dying dog will unleash lightning and thunder"? I assume it's refreshing to sirius but can't figure out how

Author's Response: Basically, Sirius dying is what pushed Harry to go out and get stuff done. If Sirius hadn't died, there wouldn't have been the opportunity (or desire) for him to have become an Unspeakable, which is what ends the war. Of course, there's a bit of play on words with dog & unleash.



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2020.12.04 - 02:16PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2020.10.25 - 02:20AM Title: Chapter 4

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What an awesome chapter! You had me cheering as each of the Death Eater groups turned up the worse for wear. In the case of the Dursleys, I can't believe I'm saying this, but I was a bit sad that Wormtail and his bunch killed them because they had no memory of Harry or magic, so essentially, it was senseless to kill them. Loved Bill's enchantment and the Crumple-Horned Snorkacks and fairies that protected the Lovegoods I read that defense twice because it was so uniquely Luna and Xeno!

I feel so sad for Hermione. Her parents did the wizarding world a lot of good when they rid the world of two Malfoys and a Goyle. I hope that she will be able to go back to Hogwarts, but at this point, I think she just might end up in Ilvermorny. I hope she can keep writing to Harry and Ron.

I don't know what I really think of Snape and what he started. I've decided to reserve judgement until I have more facts. I also think Narcissa is smart for abandoning the Manor. It really wasn't hers and if she has property of her own, she's probably safer there than anywhere else.

As you can see, I really love this story and am looking forward to chapter five.



Reviewer: AndyW33 Signed Date: 2020.10.24 - 10:02AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying this story and like the speed at which it is appearing too.
One tiny quibble(r) - there's no such thing as the Royal Army in Britain. Confusingly there is a Royal Navy and a Royal Air Force, but for reasons rooted hundreds of years back in history, the Army is called just that, or the British Army if you need to distinguish it from the armed forces of other countries.

Author's Response: Someone else pointed that out to too. Did I not fix that? Sigh, I'll go look for that and fix [again] as needed. Thanks, Kevin



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.10.21 - 07:44PM Title: Chapter 4

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Things didn't go well at all for the Dark Dork! Nice so many of the so-called elite are pushing up daisies! Kinda feel sorry for Dorko but that's what he gets for following Tom Twittle! Wonder what Hermoine will do? :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.10.21 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 4

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Well it’s nice to have friends in low places, and snape did learn his lesson again but it’s a hard lesson to keep for him....as for the crew well they need to get with harry shortly or else they are going to be pissed.....and harry needs them as welll.... kutgw



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2020.10.21 - 02:34PM Title: Chapter 4

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Lovely "family dynamics" in the Malfoy household. :-}

Interesting: Tom seems to be planning for a rather longer term (several years) than I would expect at this point in the narrative. After all, a child of (say) less than 10 is unlikely to be a tactical advantage.

Hmm? "real rope?" Lucius has (but Tom doesn't want to use) any of his supply of the fake stuff? :-)

Augusta is showing more sense than most might in similar circumstances. And Tom may be a wee bit unhappy with some of the results....

Somehow, attacking fairies seems like a fairly stupid thing to do.

Good to see Bill's skills being used. :-)

Careful with the lights, there, Dan -- your eyes will need to adjust to less light, I'd expect.

All in all, an excellent night's work... though not in Tom's favor.

Nice that Narcissa has elsewhere to be.

Appropriately cute bit with the local fauna around the Rookery protecting the Lovegoods, there.

Oh -- yeah; when the DE tried to AK Dan Granger, Hopkirk's sensors would detect it as (probably) Hermione's work. And the DE was Draco, eh?

It's good to see Harry getting some (emotional) support from an adult.

Yes, selling (& buying replacement) furniture makes a lot of sense,

I have a hard time believing that a cat would condescend to being around Tom. :-)

Author's Response: Yes, Tom has delusions of winning, so more followers who are raised to like him can only be good -- right? /s I can't help but feel the Malfoys would have multiple houses, even if they're a "small" places to get-away for a weekend or summer. As for Narcissa, yeah, she's just going from one bad situation to another at the moment -- although that really started years ago when she got married. I admit I had fun with the protectors around the Lovegoods. :) Yes, Draco set off the alarm ... Hermy certainly didn't :) I have several ideas for stories where Harry gets no support at all. I think without exception Harry is not a good person in any of them, perhaps dark gray at best. So yes, Harry gets support from at least a few people here. Err, the white cat was under the Imperious to behave. ;) I almost said "Mr Potter has to die..." but was afraid that would be a bit too subtle and the reference would be missed. Kevin



Reviewer: Phil42 Signed Date: 2020.10.21 - 02:21PM Title: Chapter 4

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What a great chapter!

Rarely have you quenched my blood thirst so thoroughly. I particularly loved how those magical creatures defended Luna. Too bad she didn't get to see a Snorkack. Maybe you'll grant her that pleasure in this story?

Could 'Betty' possibly be Andromeda Tonks? Just an idea...

Can't wait for the next chapter, KUTGW!




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