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SIYE Time:8:53 on 19th October 2021

Reviews For Through Shadows

Reviewer: aurorasky Signed Date: 2021.04.06 - 01:38PM Title: Slipping

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I am sorry to hear that RL isn't being great *hugs* so thank you very much for still making the effort to update. As for the story, wow, just wow. How you present both Voldemort's pov and Harry's at the same time is incredible. And the fact that Harry is slowly losing his self and we see how he ended up when Sirius and Remus found him.

I was confused a little about the dream where he dreams of Ginny but then I assumed that was something happening in the present and that triggered his thoughts of her in the flashbacks.

I hope that you are doing okay and seriously take all the time you need to deal with RL.




Author's Response: RL is not my favorite thing all too often lately. Thank you for the internet hug! That dream Harry has of Ginny does happen during his time in captivity. You'll see more coherent dreams about her in chapter 14, the final part of Harry's time in the cellar. Thank you!!!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.04.04 - 06:20PM Title: Slipping

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Horrific chain of events! Hope Harry will get past it soon and kills that half-blood phony Riddle! Hope Ginny is close to Harry! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: It definitely is a very sad chain of events. I'm in this for the long-haul, meaning there's a ton of healing and learning to cope coming your way. Ginny will be instrumental in helping Harry learn to move forward, I can promise you that! Thank you!



Reviewer: CharmHazel Signed Date: 2021.04.04 - 05:04AM Title: Slipping

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This certainly explains so much about what happened and just why Harry has reacted the way he did. It was interesting to see the way he became confused between his and Voldemort's actions. The dream was fascinating. Obviously, it is his subconscious recognising Ginny had seen something was wrong, even if she didn't understand.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really loved exploring Harry's mind through everything and the effects we've already seen it have on him. Chapters 14 and 15 tie off the flashbacks and bring Harry's POV up to the present with everyone else, and honestly, chapter 14 will be the most heartbreaking thing I've ever posted. We'll see even more how it is Harry is able to trust Ginny the way he does. Thanks again!



Reviewer: InkedinInk Signed Date: 2021.04.04 - 12:09AM Title: Slipping

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Thank you for finally updating. Has been waiting for it for a long time. Great chapter. Love the pace of the story. Would love to see more of Harry and Ginny.

Eagerly waiting for the next part. Hope you update soon.please update soon.

Author's Response: There's a lot in my life that's been kicking my butt hard and making it difficult to do the things I want to do. I do appreciate your patience! There will be more Harry and Ginny in the next couple of chapters, but this story is a slow-burn, so don't expect them to actually get together anytime soon. I normally try to update every Saturday, but we'll see what happens. I can't make any promises. Thanks!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2021.04.03 - 09:24PM Title: Slipping

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Please try to remember your depression might not be as bad as other peoples. Last year my wife went through various things that upset her, she threw the phone away and I shouted at her, so she took her own life. 47 years and a waste of a marriage. Not sure if I like the time jump in the story but keep it up.

Author's Response: Just letting you know here that I've sent you a private message after a long night of debating how best to respond.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.04.03 - 06:02PM Title: Slipping

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Oh flash back are a pain in the butt, but necessary to build more plot.... kutgw

Author's Response: Flashbacks can definitely be a pain in the butt! However, they're still quite necessary. We'll be back to the present in the next chapter. Thanks!




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