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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2022.06.14 - 09:22PM Title: Rebuild

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No matter how short, this is a meaningful chapter. It's one in which Harry is allowed to make decisions for himself again and not just blindly answer the way Voldemort likes him to in order to demoralize him and take away his identity. That Harry decides to trust Ginny, Sirius and Remus is definitely a step in the right direction, too, and I'm glad that he ultimately makes the decision that Harry is real. Well done. Happy chapter.



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2021.08.06 - 03:14PM Title: Rebuild

Now the who he trusts and who he doesn't trust makes more sense. Strengthen that door Harry. You can do this.

Author's Response: I wrote this chapter just for you after your questions back in chapter 4, actually, so I'm glad it makes more sense! Thank you!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.08.04 - 11:29PM Title: Rebuild

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This one was 'real'ly interesting!. Lots of questions again tho(I think I said that on the last one)! Glad Harry seems to be finding his own reality! Ginny, Sirius and Remus are a big help but Ginny is the most important link to what's real to Harry! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: You'll get to see all the different ways in which Sirius, Remus, and Ginny are able to help Harry in the next chapter. Recovery from trauma like this is definitely not a linear experience, but they all do their part to help. Thank you!



Reviewer: aurorasky Signed Date: 2021.08.02 - 05:03AM Title: Rebuild

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I love this and the other chapter before it, I like how you used "real" to mean *real* for Harry and he is so confused until Ginny comes in and then it really becomes REAL!!

Author's Response: The way his mind processed what was happening to him meant he wasn't allowed to forget what happened to Ginny his second year anymore. The diary's importance and her tie to it meant he had to come to terms, truly to terms, with what happened to her that year and that night in the Chamber of Secrets. His mind did all it could to cling to sanity, and the dream version his mind came up with was key to that. Seeing Ginny in real life forced his mind to further solidify reality, in a way, and I love that you picked up on that. Thank you!!!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.08.01 - 08:47AM Title: Rebuild

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Sometimes it’s the starting over brick by brick that allows us to move forward….I’m impressed that harry could see up and down and left and right at all after what you have put him through with Tom….. kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you! Harry is still going to have moments where he struggles to accept reality as you'll see in chapter 16, but he's a fighter and doesn't want to give up so easily.




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