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Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.07.13 - 05:29PM Title: The Mid-Years

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Albus certainly got put in his place by the Potters! The rest of the chapter was full of fun and laughs. Especially enjoyed the Potters visit to the Weasleys and the Burrow! Definitely a spark between Harry and Ginny! Like the new pooch! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and compliments! Yes, I wanted this chapter to show that Harry had a very happy and cheerful life, the opposite to canon and what Dumbledore had planned for him. Thank you for reviewing!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.07.13 - 10:08AM Title: The Mid-Years

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Well I’m impressed with what you have so far, and much happier with how your writing has improved. I knew you had some ideas and new they are flourishing wonderfully….only one little hiccup. You mentioned Ron and harry and Neville where friends while harry was visiting Fleur. Then they meet at the Weasley home a few years later.

Other then that very nice chapter….. kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your compliments! Oops, I meant to change "Ron and Neville" into just "Neville" but I guess I forgot. Thank you for pointing it out to me! I am glad you enjoyed reading! Thank you for reviewing!




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