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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.07.22 - 06:28AM Title: The Mid-Years II
Well I think any way to are writing your own story is perfect….if something is not correct it’s ok because this is a work of fiction……non fiction is where everything should be correct…..I agree with you on learning a new language, I have never done it myself so I have no idea but when in doubt go basic….nice to see Dudley is still the same as well as the rest of the Dursley….as for the interaction with malfoy’s that was fun….. kutgw
Author's Response: Thank you for your advice! As for Dudley and Draco, well, I think they should be introduced to each other. They'll get along well! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.07.21 - 08:13PM Title: The Mid-Years II
Loved it loved it loved it! What an absolutely delightful series of learning events for Harry and sibs! The snake bit was alittle alarming tho! Harry is certainly polished as an heir and his siblings are getting there! The Malflunkys sure are a bunch of stuffed shirts! I would have picked the holly tree too but the aspen would've been a close second! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you! This makes me so happy and giddy that I want to jump around. Thank you for commenting on every chapter, I look forward to your reviews whenever I post. I wanted Harry to have a cheerful and happy life, if not a bit polished, unlike what Dumbledore had planned for him with the Dursleys. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2021.07.20 - 09:28AM Title: The Mid-Years II
Some interesting events in young Harry's life! I loved how excited he got at the park!
Author's Response: I loved writing about it! What I wanted to show in Ch3, Ch 4 and Ch 5 is the happy and cheerful life that Harry grew up with, opposite of what Dumbledore had planned for him with the Dursleys as we observe in canon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
