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Reviews For Exiles
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2022.01.15 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 4
A couple of typos?
“Harry nodded on the doorframe”
knocked or leaned?
“with the skiff going across the water is was cooler still”
it was cooler still?
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.12.26 - 01:33PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor harry he is doomed but in a good way…nice to see Ron starting to figure out how grow up, but I think he needs more work…. Kutgw
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2021.12.25 - 08:18AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, it's probably just as well that Mr Evanson brought it up "like that," then. :-)
"Mrs Captain," eh? Cute. :-) [I suppose "First Mate" could be ... misconstrued.]
Good for Ron! About time he grew up a bit.
Nice bit of "evasive action" (planning to do the install while under way to NZ).
Harry probably ought to figure out what message he wants to convey to Bill before the talk itself, though. :-}
