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Reviews For The Hidden Path
Reviewer: TheHallowsInMe31 Signed Date: 2022.06.13 - 03:59AM Title: Chapter 1
You're pretty decent at explaining scenery and imagery. I myself have trouble with that so I tend to lean towards dialogue and internal monologue to fill the gaps.
It's nice that Ginny found a spot that made her feel close to Harry while she's still at Hogwarts without him. I kind of hope it stays their secret or it wouldn't feel as special anymore.
All in all, a good start to a story. KUTGW
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Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2022.03.22 - 07:48PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed the start of this and the premise! Harry and Ginny make a great team! Can't wait to see where you take us! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2022.03.22 - 08:36AM Title: Chapter 1
A nice day together for Ginny and Harry, free from any danger or angst. Very nice!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2022.03.22 - 05:44AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice little interlude….nice to see them enjoy quite time and still be comfortable in public…kutgw
