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Reviews For Old Love

Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2022.06.11 - 01:50AM Title: Learning the Truth

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I'm glad Willow was brave enough and bold enough to spend the time waiting for Harry to appear in his garden. It was really nice of her to help him and I'm glad they seem to be becoming friends. It was also brave of Harry to tell her the story of why he's a hermit. It made me smile when they talked about Hogwarts. Finally, I'm glad her parents gave her permission to try to coax Harry over to their house for dinner so the whole family could meet him. That's probably going to open up a new can of worms and a lot of memories that may not be entirely pleasant. Well done.

Author's Response: Yeah, I needed them to be able to do an activity where they could bond and get used to each other's presence. Harry, being a hermit, isn't used to having conversation or being around people so working in the garden together softened him up to the conversations they would have later on the porch. I've been debating with myself constantly on how to reveal certain key points of the story. Willow's birthday seemed like the safest bet. It's more like a can of worms inside another can of worms tbh lol Thanks again for reviewing =)



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2022.06.09 - 05:29AM Title: Learning the Truth

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It's a really wonderful, heartbreaking story. I wonder what exactly happened in the past and whom Ginny married. And no, I never ask for spoilers. I just like to speculate, lol. And some of my assumptions after reading the first chapter seem to be right. Oh, and the silly break-up. Ever since reading HBP so many years ago I think it was wrong. I'm glad the Harry in this story came to the same conclusion.
Harry disappearing after the war usually isn't the kind of story I like to read, but somehow you've got me hooked.

Author's Response: I'm not so good at doing complete 180 plot twists so a lot of my minor plot twists can be picked up and figured out quite easily, although, not everything is always as it seems. I agree. Harry never should have broken up with Ginny at the end of HBP. That was just the type of person he was sadly. I will give you one piece of information. Ginny did indeed get married to someone that wasn't Harry Potter. I know I know, such a tragedy. I will tell you this though that it wasn't until later. It's not like she married this man when she turned 20 or anything. I don't like thinking of Ginny being with anyone but Harry either, but it is, I feel, integral to the plot. Everything will be explained in either chapter 5 or 6 including when and why Harry disappeared. He took time off to heal after the war but didn't disappear until years later. Thank you for reviewing =)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2022.06.04 - 08:54AM Title: Learning the Truth

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Sometimes youth is wiser then experienced….kutgw



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2022.06.03 - 12:16PM Title: Learning the Truth

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And so the stage is set for one heckuva a reunion! Interesting that mum's name is Lily! On to the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying my story so much. I only hope you continue to do so. I'm working on 2 stories simultaneously so it might be a week before I can update this one again but I hope to see you again in the next chapter. Thank you for the review =)



Reviewer: manish Signed Date: 2022.06.03 - 07:10AM Title: Learning the Truth

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Great start to a story and somehow the characters are already intertwining, will keep an eye on the updates, Great work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always nice to see my work is appreciated. Chapter 3 going up as we speak =)



Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2022.06.02 - 04:43AM Title: Learning the Truth

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Hurts to know that Harry and Ginny have been apart for so long! Can he go back in time and change his decisions? oh well will wait and see what you’ve got planned.

Author's Response: I had originally planned this story to not have such a large gap between the years but I felt like Willow was a really good character to introduce. For the plot, I had to have her not know who Harry Potter really was so I had to skip a generation. Remember though, wizards live longer than muggles so if he does reconcile with former friends/family/love interests, then they will still have plenty of time to form new memories together. You won't have to wait too long as I'm already almost done with chapter 3 and this story isn't going to be some 200k word novel or anything. Thank you again for the review =)




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