Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ritual of Love's Memory
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2023.01.11 - 08:24AM Title: Chapter 16
Apparently, the memory of the future Ginny did something to Harry. Instead of muddling around to make it through the tournament and pining for Cho, he's now acknowledging that he has friends who'll help him, no matter what. As much as I usually wish it was Ginny whom Harry would solemnly miss the most, he's not quite there yet. He has yet to ponder things - like that almost kiss after the Yule Ball, which I don't think he has done yet, lol. Bisides, it would probably overwhelm Ginny as well to find herself down at the bottom of the lake.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.01.01 - 11:00AM Title: Chapter 16
Well I have a feeling that the champion s are now more even then ever beforeâ€¦.kutgw
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2022.12.31 - 01:55AM Title: Chapter 16
Another triumph of a chapter! The planning section for the second task was so much better than what we know happened in canon. I love that you included Neville in Harry's support group and that he contributed to Harry's success in the task with the Gillyweed suggestion. It was nice that Harry was able to practice with it before he needed it for real. Also, you made me laugh when Dobby, again, woke Harry up twenty minutes before the event. I find it interesting that the giant squid thought Harry and the other champions were something edible when Harry clearly thought it wouldn't be something to worry about. I suppose that with the number of "invaders" in the lake rescuing their hostages, that the poor squid became alarmed and tried to protect its territory. Finally, I had to smile when Harry shared his last bit of Gillyweed to help Krum survive the task and rescue his hostage. I'm sure Ginny noticed this and I'm hoping that maybe she'll say something nice to Harry in another chapter. Well done.