Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ritual of Love's Memory
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.03.18 - 02:40PM Title: Chapter 27
Of all the things you covered in this chapter, the two scenes I liked most were the talk between Neville, Ron and Harry in their dormitory and Dumbledore's speech at the leaving feast. The first scene really should have taken place in the books because it's probably going to set up things that happen in the fifth year. It also helps Harry and Ron understand Neville's circumstances better. I love how Ron cited his experiences with his brother's wand and what happened in his classes when he had one of his own. The silent support that Harry gave Neville just warmed my heart. The second scene mimics the feast in the books but is so much more. Dumbledore's sincere honesty may have gotten through to more of the students than it seems it did in the books, so that remains to be seen. Finally, I had to smile at the sisterly smirk exchanged between Ginny and Fleur and the fact that Fleur seemed to approve of Ginny trying the spells on her brothers! I hope this is a departure from Ginny eventually calling Fleur "Phlegm" after Bill introduces her to his family! Maybe the two will exchange letters over the summer?
Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2023.03.14 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 27
I love this story, and this chapter. Poor Viktor, you made me like him so much only to kill him off! Your characterization is deeper than many stories go and so well done, I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2023.03.13 - 03:44AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter where I had the feeling you're setting up a lot of things for the future, like clueing Ron in on Hermione's emotional life, setting a first connection between Ginny and Fleur, including Neville a bit more, ... Loved it.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.03.10 - 03:00PM Title: Chapter 27
Well Im glad to see harry has been smart to give the money to Fred and George again, and to get Ron and ginny something in the process. Hopefully now that they are done with he tournament they can start to make head way with the dream harry had...kutgw