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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.03.30 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter 29

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Well at least harry followed orders and now is safe, but i still think you’re going to throw our favorite character in soon, and I hope I’m wrong…kutgw

Author's Response: I think you may enjoy how our favorite character is different in this story...



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.03.29 - 11:29PM Title: Chapter 29

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I like the changes you made to this part of the story. It seems a lot calmer and a little less fraught with anxiety. While Petunia and Vernon seem to be on form, making Dudley seem a little more like a teenager than a thug is a nice change and seems to be a preamble to the leaving scene in DH. Moody made me laugh at his paranoia while Arthur's calm demeanor did wonders to help Harry stay calm, it seems. Well done. I liked this chapter a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! Dudley doesn't factor into my plans much, but I did hope that a small moment of growth contrasting with Vernon and Petunia's static characters might be a nice change of pace. Arthur has lived with eight people with varying levels of high-energy volatility, so I like to think his demeanor is part necessarily honed skill, part natural inclination. Big stuff coming next week, so I'll be interested to see what you think!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2023.03.29 - 09:07PM Title: Chapter 29

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Well, Harry's free of the Dursleys again and on his way to see his friends. I look forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Next week's chapter is a big one. Looking forward to reading your thoughts!




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