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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2023.04.16 - 04:32PM Title: Chapter 31

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I loved Harry's conversation with Sirius and had to grin about Sirius' idea of putting Harry and Ginny together in one cleaning team. And now I'm wondering how long it takes Harry to heed Sirius' advice. Lol. On the other hand, from now on, it'll surely be a bit awkward for Harry to be around his friends, and especially Ginny, as long as he can't talk to them about the most important things in his life. Without doubt, they'll keep asking questions about his meetings with Dumnbledore's circle. I don't want to be in Harry's shoes right now. Lol.
Great chapter! Thank you!

Author's Response: RLM's 100th SIYE comment! It was super fun to write the Harry / Sirius conversation. I think Sirius gave some good advice, but you're right that the question now becomes when does Harry act on it? It's a tough spot for him, but I'm hopeful that he can figure something out eventually.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.04.14 - 12:54PM Title: Chapter 31

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Oh harry just grow a pair to ask the girl before its to late…as for Fred and George it looks like they are on the road to success with a few extra hands helping along the way…kutgw

Author's Response: I think Harry might defend himself by saying it’s a bit intimidating to ask out someone, especially having never done it before. Hopefully he figures it out soon!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.04.13 - 06:34PM Title: Chapter 31

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You've done Harry a great service by giving him some extra one-on-one time with Sirius after the Order meeting. I had to smile when Ron impatiently woke him the next morning. You really have Ron's character pegged. I was also smiling during the lunch scene when Sirius suggested the cleaning pairings and poor Harry started having flashbacks to being tongue tied as he asked Ginny to the ball. I can understand why he decided to let the time drift away as they finished their room and went to the library. It was also very nice to know that Sirius is helping the twins with their dream shop. (By the way, it's Weasley's Wizard Wheezes... no ING at the end.) All in all, well done.

Author's Response: Sirius is super fun to write, and I love Ron so much that I can't help but smile at your kind compliment about my characterization of him. Hopefully Harry gets over his nervousness soon!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2023.04.13 - 12:10PM Title: Chapter 31

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Ask her, Harry! Don't wait or someone else will.

Author's Response: At least he's admitted that he wants to ask her. That's a big step for him. But I get the feeling he might find the courage to ask her before the end of the summer...




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