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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.05.01 - 08:51PM Title: Chapter 32

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Great chapter! The planning meeting seemed to go quite well and gave Harry a few things to appease Ron and Hermione with. However, the biggest smile split my face when, after his talk with Ginny, he heard her breathe, "Finally!" Your characterization of George's fidgetiness seems to be spot on. I love how concerned everyone is and it was nice of you to have Atzi discover Harry's grin. Mission accomplished, I'd say! Well done!

Author's Response: Super pleased that you enjoyed this chapter! I'd been fretting about it since beginning this story, but it came together better than I expected. It was fun to bring the original timeline back. Thanks for the comment!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2023.04.27 - 09:53AM Title: Chapter 32

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Oops! I think I already left a few words for this chapter, but apparently I didn't.

Oh, Harry. If your memory had said, 'she had fought with one of Voldemort's seven horcruxes', you'd have saved them a lot of work, lol.

Oh, Harry. You did it, and you did it in a moment I didn't expect it. I'm glad the Gryffindor courage finally found its way back to you, lol.

The ending was funny, lol. It took me a moment to realize what just had happened, and I didn't fully comprehend it until I read the name Atzi. Lol.

Great idea, great chapter!

Author's Response: Harry doesn't like to do anything the easy way, so gotta leave some suspense in figuring out the number of horcruxes. I love to subvert expectations, so I'm glad you didn't see the kiss coming. Thought it'd be a meaningful time to check back in on the gang in ?Tenochtitlán?. Thanks for the encouraging comment!



Reviewer: FelWraith Signed Date: 2023.04.19 - 01:45AM Title: Chapter 32

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Thanks for the early chapter! I'm glad you let them get together at this point. I was a bit worried it would be dragged on for a while. Excellent writing as always! Thanks again.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I'm glad they got together, too. I appreciate your encouragement!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.04.18 - 09:09PM Title: Chapter 32

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Now i was wondering if we were ever going to hear about the crew that survived again or not. Nice to see Harry finally getting his courage up and making his move…kutgw

Author's Response: Been holding onto the first timeline update section for a while, so I'm glad you appreciated it. If I'd kept Harry from asking Gin much longer, I thought there might be a reader revolt! Thanks for dropping a comment!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2023.04.18 - 10:10AM Title: Chapter 32

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Yes! Harry finally worked up the nerve to kiss Ginny! I've been waiting for this to happen, and I think you handled it perfectly.

That ending scene, though! What's going on? Is this all some kind of dream future Harry is having? Did the ritual create some kind of link between future Harry and past Harry? I'm baffled! I'll be waiting eagerly to find out more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think the scene worked well! As for the other timeline, that section was just a reminder that those characters do still exist and that I haven't forgotten about them. We probably won't see them again for a while, but there are plans in the works to address their timeline!



Reviewer: LadyKitai Signed Date: 2023.04.17 - 02:01PM Title: Chapter 32

If I could scream I would scream right now!! You gave us the Kiss and a look back into the future in the same chapter?! It was perfection!! I can’t wait for more, and I can’t wait to reread this chapter in a couple of days on others sites. This story is just so amazing!

Author's Response: I'd been worried about how to give their first kiss the appropriate amount of gravitas without making Harry into some casanova who gushed out descriptions of his emotions in a way-too-eloquent monologue. When the idea to do a scene from the first timeline occurred to me, I couldn't stop smiling. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for sticking around long enough to see Harry and Ginny get together... Finally!




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