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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.05.19 - 09:43PM Title: Chapter 35

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As far as "filler" chapters go, this one covers quite a lot and moves the plot along nicely. It was nice to get a glimpse of Harry and Ginny's birthdays, and life in general in Grimmauld Place. It was nice to see how Ron paired up with Fred and George and actually got along with them when Harry and Ginny tried to find some quiet time together. You did a nice job of the train ride. I've never liked that particular journey because of how Neville is portrayed. While we don't know about the properties of the Mimbulus mimbletonia, it was nice to know it exists in this particular time line. Also, thank you for having Luna explain about the Thestrals; you gave her character credibility after all the imaginative things she includes in her conversations in canon. Well done.

Author's Response: You have a knack for zeroing in on parts of a chapter that I spent extra time / effort on and you understand the challenges of different aspects of story-telling. I find your reviews exceptionally encouraging and reassuring, especially how you often notice little things that meant a lot to me while writing. I liked building up Luna and Neville, as well as establishing a bit more independence for Ron. Thanks so much for the comment!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.05.14 - 09:08AM Title: Chapter 35

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Well im glad harry and Ginny got to go out on a date even if the chaperones should have been up to more…glad also to see Luna a simulate with he Group….kutgw

Author's Response: Writing the date was fun and I really love any chance to feature Luna. Thanks for leaving a comment!



Reviewer: FelWraith Signed Date: 2023.05.12 - 02:22AM Title: Chapter 35

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Excellent. Excited that they're back at hogwarts and starting the school year. It will be interesting to see what changes for the 5th year. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment! I’m glad they’re back at school, too. There will definitely be some big changes!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2023.05.11 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 35

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Great chapter. I loved their birthday gifts - simple but so good! Harry values his friends so much, and exploring the muggle world with Ginny was the perfect idea.
Now let the new school year begin!

Author's Response: So many fics have done wonders with creative birthday gifts, so I’m glad you enjoyed my take. Having Ginny reflect some of her father’s wonder when faced with muggle in ovation was fun, especially since I have such a deep and abiding love for both Arthur and Ginny. Here comes a new school year!




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