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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.05.27 - 03:49PM Title: Chapter 37

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Your where right I wasn’t disappointed…..HARRY IS ROYALY SCREWED…..but at lease their is some shining… but i have a feeling unhitch will be wining the battles but in the long run harry better use his head and win the war….kutgw

Author's Response: I like to see it as a chess match; they're both going to lose a few pieces as they feel out their opponent's strategy and proclivities. Both are super stubborn and utterly devoted to winning, which I hope will make it a fight worth following. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: FelWraith Signed Date: 2023.05.27 - 01:14PM Title: Chapter 37

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Umbridge is as frustrating as ever. Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response: She sure is! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.05.27 - 12:19AM Title: Chapter 37

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You have taken one of my most hated chapters in the HP universe and turned it into something tolerable. When I read the chapter on Harry's first Defense lesson in canon, I often have to put the book down in order to compose myself! With the changes you made in this part of the story, I was able to read through to the end with no trouble and even enjoy the ending scene with Professor McGonagall. The fact that she pulled out the by-laws of Hogwarts and is willing to use them against Umbridge made me smile. Keep up the good work...well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, Arnel! Also, I wouldn't say I like the chapter, and writing her scenes is exciting and infuriating. I have no idea how I'd deal with a teacher like her, but it's fun to give that challenge to Harry and his friends. McGonagall believes in Harry a bit more this time around, and I'm excited to see her and the other professors opposing Umbridge in some new and exciting ways! Thanks for the comment!




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