Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ritual of Love's Memory
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.06.18 - 04:52PM Title: Chapter 40 Nice to see that the groups are starting to learn more….snape really needs to grow up and start acting more mature then he is right now…kutgw Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.06.17 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter 40 What a fun chapter! You did a great job with your characterizations of Harry's teachers at the meeting, pitting them against each other verbally as they explained what would be going on with Harry's training. I'm glad they agreed to include Cedric, Ron, Hermione and Ginny as much as possible. Your solution to the Occlumency tutoring made me smile; not only did you neutralize Snape, you found a way to protect Harry against Voldemort's suggestive visions. Hopefully, Harry will be a little more successful at keeping Voldemort out of his mind than he was in canon. The best part of the chapter, though, was the first training session in the Charms classroom. I really enjoyed the action and the fact that Ron, Ginny and Hermione were able to even the odds during the second exercise. I think all five will learn a lot from each other while they are working with the teachers. Well done. | |||||||
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