Reviewer: Arnel Signed
2023.09.08 - 08:14PM
I'm so glad Fred and George's Hush Putty worked so well for Neville. Glad to know Neville was able to survive his detention with a minimal amount of discomfort from the quill.
Nice job on the Quidditch match! Action sequences like these games are always hard to write; you kept the momentum flowing and building to a sub climax and then the real one with the Snitch catch. Nice idea having Harry and Cedric collide. I've never seen that done in a fan fic before. Good game, even if Ron felt he had lots of improving to do at the end of the game. Hopefully, he'll learn from the experience.
Author's Response: I'm glad Neville got a chance to stand up for himself without dealing with all the Quill of Echoes repercussions. I had lots of fun trying to come up with interesting things to do within the setting of a Quidditch match. I'm not yet sure how many more of these matches I'll actually be writing for the story, but it was fun to get to use the game to further some plot points. Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
2023.09.08 - 06:20PM
Well i feel sorry for Madam Pomfrey but she does bring it on her self. As for harry and Diggory they are good sports and show it in everything. Nice to also see life is moving forwardâ€¦.kutgw
Author's Response: Harry and Cedric are pretty good sports, despite the thick-headedness Pomfrey points out. Thanks for dropping a comment!