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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2023.11.11 - 10:27PM Title: Chapter 61
My compliments to you for producing a chapter worthy of an Umbridge speech! The meeting between the adults and Harry concerning the Horcruxes certainly shows the ponderous committee approach to solving problems. They certainly came close to finding the right place to look for Hufflepuff's cup and the possibility for the Ravenclaw relic, but they just didn't quite get there in their round-about discussion. Well done for nearly putting me and Harry to sleep!
Author's Response: It's tough for me to figure out what details to include in the story that are important for the characters to know but that the readers already understand. They are closing in on some more horcruxes, though! Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2023.11.11 - 01:02PM Title: Chapter 61
While in one form I agree with albus in another and more dominant way harry is correct and its time they work them in and more youth…it is after all the youths hat carrying on the traditions that have been laced down before them,,,kutgw
Author's Response: I think it'll take a little more convincing to get Dumbledore to agree with your assessment, but I'm looking forward to having the students more involved in the future. Thanks for the comment!
